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What would you say,
If my heart began to crumble,
Never to be seen again,
Lifeless and broken along the ground,
Desolate..
Time standing still,
Only to capture the moment
Of my world shattering before,
My hand's that shall never touch,
What I've become to love,
Emptiness..
It could have been better,
I could have kissed the hands,
Of pure bliss..
Fallen deep within this void,
Yet, the answers are so unclear,
For the tears..
Leave only miles to walk,
Miles unto you..
I know this is a poor excuse,
Only my confessions, my pleas,
Laying empty and broken at your feet,
I shed another tear,
A tear of utter failure...




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On Sunday November 28th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:
"What would you say if my heart began to crumble?", weightless/dust/bleached.. random strong things that came to mind, this write is the best of yours I've read so far.. great write.


On Thursday September 2nd, 2004, DarkWolf (442) writes:
Such pain and sorrow and hopelessness... Wonderful write. -Michael


On Thursday August 19th, 2004, AHHH (239) writes:
very lovely


On Sunday August 1st, 2004, Whisper (136) writes:
This is a very touching write. I love it. -Pandora-


On Sunday August 1st, 2004, Deadly Embrace (43) writes:
Aw.. thanks *hugs six*


On Sunday August 1st, 2004, inthewakeofshadows (51) writes:
this write carries so much meaning with it...beautiful in everyway...excellent job here! -wake


On Sunday August 1st, 2004, Soulseeker (119) writes:
Painfully beautiful! Great write! Bethany


On Sunday August 1st, 2004, sixsixnine (552) writes:
fuck this is so deep! i loved the verses & the flow very painful ~669~



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