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No One Understands

No one ever understands
they just let thing's drift away
Without second thought
of what may happen
Or what might come their way
They just read the words
as if their nothing..
Nothing was ever said
No tears were ever cried.
nor blood ever shed,
Now this is all a lie
but some may think
it's true,
it doesn't matter
what is written
it doesn't concern of you

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On Monday July 3rd, 2006, sixsixnine (552) writes:

fuck me! i feel this sinking deeper.

On Monday October 10th, 2005, An Expired Member (56) writes:

yes... exactly right, that nothing is their problem.. i like it, and it has the "fuck you" ring to it

On Sunday November 28th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

strong and deep. nice work once again :)

On Sunday October 24th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

I like it!! a lot!!!!

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, AHHH (239) writes:

wow...perfectly written.

On Friday September 3rd, 2004, Solace (1421) writes:

This was deep and melancholy, drifting with an air of discontent and a spiteful apathy...Wonderfully and simply rendered...Awesome work

On Friday September 3rd, 2004, Solace (1421) writes:

"They read the words as if "Their" should be "they're" feel free to delete this comment after rectifying

On Monday August 30th, 2004, DarkWolf (442) writes:

such a lonely empty feeling with this one.. well written well said. -Michael

On Friday August 6th, 2004, sixsixnine (552) writes:

i feel this* much deeper after so much shit ~very well written *669*

On Thursday July 22nd, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:

your right straight from the heart. with a passionate burning. every wor dyou write is directly from what you feel and directly from your experiences. or so it seems. awesome.

On Tuesday July 20th, 2004, An Expired Member (69) writes:

harsh

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (10) writes:

I really like this one... it's nothing less then the truth!! Nice Work!

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, -Oz- (173) writes:

this is nice, it reminds me of a love note being given to someone a person likes and then they write some smartass comment back , or rip it up and trash it...but you make a good point with your words, -Oz-

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