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At the bridge

                   At the bridge
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    No particular           Regard(less)
  History                 I would
   Of control,         Recommend
Gravity               an intermediate
  Requests (insist)              All Haste
      My                       diminishing
Presence                   In my Absence

Regrettfully my submission does not of prose supplant cold equation

                                   and I begin to fall.

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On Wednesday May 10th, 2006, Army Barbie (491) writes:

Hm. This was extremely interesting. I don't think I've read and reread something so much in a long time. I think it's the style it's in cause hot damn I was lost at first. But I think I'm in love with you lol

On Monday March 13th, 2006, heartdripsblack (768) writes:

awsome poem

On Thursday March 2nd, 2006, The Fool (1001) writes:

Wow I loved this:)

On Wednesday February 22nd, 2006, Ezimo (266) writes:

Wow, This is a cool way you did this. I don't understand it much but it is good from what i see.

On Thursday June 23rd, 2005, Serenity (598) writes:

The style and words are simply amazing.

On Monday May 2nd, 2005, Kinkypoptart (765) writes:

interesting way of doing things. Great write ~*~TarT~*~

On Monday January 31st, 2005, An Expired Member (25) writes:

like it for some odd reason..the words just seem to fit, as well as the lil a thingies...thanx

On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, blue (1740) writes:

You should be extremely proud of yourself for this write...you've raised the bar! ~~FAVS LIST~ sincerely, Brian.

On Sunday October 17th, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:

I am speechless and to say the least, impressed. Unique in it's originality. Very divine. ~*~ Rose ~*~

On Sunday September 19th, 2004, knightmirror (424) writes:

holy crap!!!!!!!!where have i been...apparently not reading to much...awesome job...****-knight

On Saturday September 11th, 2004, The Kid Of Corruption (148) writes:

wow I like this piece as well, can't wait to read more.

On Thursday September 9th, 2004, Dayer (201) writes:

this was great :)

On Monday September 6th, 2004, AHHH (241) writes:

wow, nice

On Friday September 3rd, 2004, Deliverence (799) writes:

Exactly as the others said.-Kefkism

On Saturday June 19th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:

a very cool piece, never seen any poem as originally written as this...excellent indeed! keep writing & i'll keep reading... -MeL-

On Thursday June 17th, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:

great great work, i understood the level of the first part especially, feelings ive often pondered, the structure here adds to its weight, im impressed

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