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Subliminal 3

Eating new
And
Tasty food
Makes
Our belly quit
Rumbling, for it is now
Excited, as well as the tongue, whose
Very purpose is to
Excite our senses with
Good, no
Great new tastes, salivating with each
Incredible mouthful, oh this
Exciting new taste, if only it could
Stay on our tongue forever...

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On Saturday June 16th, 2007, carlosjackal (1726) writes:

Love that last line. Eating is one of my all-time favourite things. -Carl

On Monday November 7th, 2005, An Expired Member (56) writes:

Awesome...reminds of this quote. Its not what goes into the mouth its what comes out of it because does the stomach not digest it? What comes out just floats into the sky along with everyone elses shit...

On Saturday September 11th, 2004, girlafraid (577) writes:

this made me hungry :) but i also like meat...veggies are ok, but only as a side dish.

On Friday September 10th, 2004, lordshadow (211) writes:

NOW Apathy's comments make sense. It definitely took your hint in the first one for it to dawn on me... you got one over on me >:-)

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (548) writes:

no thank you I like meat

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (548) writes:

meat meat meat meat

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Dayer (200) writes:

meat is good too :p

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