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She lives with no regrets
Kindly offering the pleasures men seek
An affordable panderer of fantasies
Neglecting self-respect for self fulfillment
Kidlike beliefs that sex is the only way
She lives with her legs apart

Self respect removed with her cherry
To gain that needed attention from men
Isn't that what makes girls popular?
Lonely, struggling to gain dignity
Living with her legs wide open

Looking for comfort in sex warmed sheets
Undressing men with her seductive eyes
Reassuring herself, "He really loves me"
Knowing she has never had a real love

He'll keep coming back to me, she thinks
Even as she hears whispers of
Reputations, convincing herself what they say is a lie
Every self replicating logic is based on self deception...
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Note: There is a subliminal message hidden in this poem, can you find it?



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On Saturday September 11th, 2004, girlafraid (577) writes:
hmmm i think i know this girl...i like the subliminal, it doesn't seem forced like others with this form...nice work


On Sunday September 12th, 2004, Dayer (200) writes:
probably because this was the 1st one of the subliminals that I wrote, I guess it came more naturally, thanks ;)


On Monday September 6th, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (548) writes:
Skanks still lurk here hehehehe


On Tuesday September 7th, 2004, Dayer (200) writes:
hehe yup LOL ;)


On Saturday August 21st, 2004, OLd SouL (834) writes:
So you've met my ex?


On Saturday August 21st, 2004, purr_verse (1427) writes:
great closing line particularly; and subliminals lie in the beginning of every line... :)


On Saturday August 21st, 2004, Dayer (200) writes:
yes purr_verse you got it :)


On Saturday August 21st, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
nope, cant find it but this was still a great peom to read.~~~Grave



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