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Broken

He broke her...
As she stared deep into his eyes
She saw nothing more than faceless lies
At that moment she began to see
Being with him meant to never be free
She'd created a fantasy to help understand
Why beating a woman, made him more of a man
Night after night she had dealt with his games
And day after day she had lived with the pain
She watched as the blood flowed freely from his head
And thanked God for the gun she kept next to her bed
Once broken

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On Tuesday November 29th, 2005, MGood (77) writes:

Wow, I love the power in this piece. Nice work! ~Mary

On Friday September 17th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

Even if it's broken, that's the way to fix it! I like.

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

The ending kinda threw me off but the rest of it good. =)

On Wednesday August 18th, 2004, Dayer (200) writes:

Thanks :)

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, addicted_angel (27) writes:

well written, addicted_angel

On Saturday August 7th, 2004, Dayer (200) writes:

Thank you both ~*~Dayer~*~

On Monday June 14th, 2004, K_Love (686) writes:

Wow... truly a masterpiece indeed. Very beautiful, Riveting and suspensful! Great outcome of an ending.. she shouldn't put up with that anyways.. *claps* ~Kirsten~

On Monday June 14th, 2004, Heart of Stone (32) writes:

*rubs hands together* I really like this. It's beautifully evil. Great Job -Heart

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