DarkPoetry -|- Belle -|- heroine

heroine

it takes me
by the throat
screams into me
it rules me
it is unforgiving
It has been one day
since my last confession
this is my addiction
it grips me
like death
makes me close my eyes
to bitter sweet darkness
makes my eyes clouded with guilt
makes me wish I could change
what has all ready been done
what has all ready become
making me cover the scars
hollow like graves
to stop grieving
and start believing
that I might be able to make it
through this.

Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.

Comments on heroine

If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Tuesday October 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (58) writes:

this is good..have you heard heroine by velvet undergorund ?..

On Saturday June 26th, 2004, MGood (77) writes:

This poem has so much feeling... I really like it...

On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, CarpeDiemJane (42) writes:

i like the twist in it. like the sweet stuff in the lemon. !awesome!

On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, serpentine_fire (207) writes:

this is an amazing peice. so many can relate to these feelings, yet never express them the way you have. awesome ~serpentine~

On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:

like a shot to the chest, this made it hard to breathe for a minute. Great write.

On Monday June 21st, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

it's really awesome....i love it! I can't stop reading it!!!

On Monday June 21st, 2004, Six-Out (1820) writes:

This...hit me..harder than I'd like... wonderfuly played out...

On Monday June 21st, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:

_this is super intense...wicked imagery,my dear...i love it.:)tim

On Monday June 21st, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:

...I'm stutterring and tripping on my brain. Total fuckin favorite darlin'. Awesome. Sue Zen

On Monday June 21st, 2004, glasshouse (780) writes:

The last 4 lines were absolutely amazing. The whole piece was. I love your work. I really do. Another great piece. -Glass

Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read Home Copyright Policy Bugs

Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC

© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.

Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/6273/40364 on Saturday November 22nd, 2008 06:24 PM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)