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Kill Shadow

Total Castration!!!

Fuck You Shadow!!!

Your just a fucking parasite!
I'll unleash hell and beat you till you die!

I hate you more than words can describe
You're so goddamn stupid and fake now
Hatred towards a person can lead to death
I will leave you limbless and shot down

Funny thing is if we are friends again
This song will remain forever in my mind
I will also play it wherever I go I said
Never to be forgotten these words unkind

Bloody Hammer to your head!!!

Fuck You Shadow!!!

Come and get me or shut the fuck up!
Your threats are lies and your scared to face me!

Can't believe I met a backstabber like you
You won't help me after all I done for you
There's no room to judge so it is fuck you
Move in for the kill nothing else left to do

You took the side of bitches that are theives
You realized that they did us both all wrong
You like to be alone drown in misery and pain
Wish you'd be dead by the ending of this song

Bloody Mess in a hail of Gunfire!!!

Fuck You Shadow!!!

The Destruction of you as a person!
That is the only way I will move on!

Fuck You Shadow!!!

Sucker For Love Ass Trick!!!

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On Friday May 30th, 2008, Dark Goth (57) writes:

ok so whoever else is reading this. fuck what prophet says there wasn't much thought in this one just gettng anger out which doesn't require much effort. also the next one i'm writing I'm spending lots more time on. It'll be a masterpiece.

On Thursday May 29th, 2008, TheProphetUntold (360) writes:

Constructive eh? How about if you are going to go crazy with punctuation you may try using it properly throughout the entire piece. There's no order or meter to any of your stanzas or idea whatsoever. Ever learn about run on sentences? This is riddled with them, as well as vulgarities, which really shows your intellectual capabilities and range of vocabulary. How's that? +tpu+

On Thursday May 29th, 2008, TheProphetUntold (360) writes:

Good enough or would you like more?

On Monday May 26th, 2008, Syringe (71) writes:

i can smell your anger. who says u need to have a clever rhyme or quip to call it a poem? pshh..i don't. you got your message out loud and clear. ty for sharing. the only thing.. i think you should've ended it with 'fuck you shadow'.that statement is powerful enough if u ask me.

On Tuesday May 27th, 2008, Dark Goth (57) writes:

thanks but the sucker name was another thing I called him and it bothered him very much so I thought I'd throw that in there and share it with the dp world as well heh.

On Monday May 26th, 2008, An Expired Member (30) writes:

if you love like you are hating in this one...there is one LUCKY Lady in this pitiful universe...I felt the anger!!

On Monday May 26th, 2008, An Expired Member (9) writes:

Not very artsy, but I like your energy and passion...

On Sunday May 25th, 2008, Dark Goth (57) writes:

I didn't put much thought in this one. Just had to get my anger out on someone.

On Sunday May 25th, 2008, TheProphetUntold (360) writes:

This sucks.

On Monday May 26th, 2008, TheProphetUntold (360) writes:

Maybe you should read my work again, or maybe the comments below it, with the exception of your ill worded ignorant blather. Better yet read an article about poetry and the devices used there in, read the work again. Then pass an educated judgement... and have a nice day. +tpu+

On Thursday May 29th, 2008, evolve (2246) writes:

Uhm. I tried to read this and give it a chance, but I just...couldn't. "This sucks" isn't the nicest way to put it, but honestly, it does... :]

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