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have you ever had someone say they loved you
then betray you in the worst way?

no i dont mean to cheat
but something so much worse

the one person i came so close to loving
more than anything in the world
took all i had left
in my being

all that is
precious and dear to me
and crushed it with a single
careless and swift movement

she left me here
stranded forever
in oblivion

yet still she says
she loVes me
HAH!
she doent even know what love is

love...
something i havnt been capable of for a while
no, no i shouldnt say that because i do love

one and only one
and when she died...
she took every bit of love
in my entire being
with her

so there it will lie
six feet under
in a cramped ivory box
with satin lining

next to my love
my forever beloved
Rachel

Rest in piece my decadent angel
                    RACHEL (1985-2001)

i love you now and forever
and nobody can EVER take that away!




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On Sunday May 15th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
im so sorry you lost her..i've gone through pain like this, im sorry you had to go through it..im here if you need to talk to somebody..i say it to everyone..great write..such sadness.. -Kel


On Sunday May 15th, 2005, An Expired Member (21) writes:
theres so much emotion in this. im sorry you lost her. great write though.


On Sunday May 15th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (757) writes:
Awww, sorry for your loss. Wonderful write ~*~Tart~*~



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