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*i know this isnt really a poem but i still like it*




wind: i wish it would rain

girl: i want a storm...

girl: one like no other that michigan has seen before

girl: i want to walk out into it and become lost

girl: i want it to take me away to where i truly belong and give me my clean start in a place where i am well off

wind: mmm....that sounds good

girl: i miss storms as they once were

girl: i remember storms that would last forever ones that were dangerous, but now they are far too weak and short to suit my liking

wind: yes, well it seems humanity has corrupted them too much to have them let go; open their flood gates and show their true beauty

girl: its so sad that everyone hates storms and wills them to be so small...

wind: yes its a real shame no one sees their glory whilst they cover their heads with their sweaty crumpled sheets

wind: ...a true crying shame





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On Friday May 13th, 2005, Cinn (188) writes:
This was definately cool. The whole thing with storms is true though, litterally and as an analogy. Nicely done. -Cinn


On Wednesday January 5th, 2005, purr_verse (1435) writes:
i really like the concept here; very impressively done indeed - like a snapshot of thought somehow... Great stuff, anyway. :)


On Wednesday January 5th, 2005, blue (1742) writes:
:):):) This was a truly refreshing piece!! Well done!!!! ~b


On Wednesday January 5th, 2005, lordshadow (212) writes:
I loved it. Absolutely loved it. Original, unique, and not the same ol' stuff you read here on a daily basis. Wonderful. You are quite talented.


On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, stormtalk (908) writes:
It's a poem if you call it one ;) Very well done... I like this one a lot; there's nothing more fun than an original style.


On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, sIo (884) writes:
i actually really like this. this is pretty freaking awesome. i can relate.



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