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"My Crying, Her Dying" by Lucia

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Off In My Room,
Soaking My Sheets With Tears,
Thinking About The Past 2 Years,
And How They're So In Jeopardy...

I Love Her So, Can't Let Her Go,
But She Can't Change Herself,
To Defy The World's Cruality...

She's Lost In Herself,
Can't Find The Way Out,
Confused And She Doesn't Know It...

Recurring Patterns, Redeeming Tendencies,
Her Instant Gratification To Ease The Soul,
She Never Gets What She Wants,
Unless She Does Something She Hates...

Plays Happy All The Time,
Plasters A Smile On,
Wears A Skirt With No Panties, So She Can Hackey-Sack All The Day...
Flambouyants Exposing Clothes, Her Closest Friends Think She's A Whore,
They Don't Want To Be Her Friends Anymore...

She's Being Avoided By Everyone,
They Can All See Through Her Fake Laughter...
But She Wants To Be Loved By All,
So She Strips Off Her Clothes, And Exposes Her Rose,
Knowing (Thinking) That's What All The Boys Really Want...

They Just Use Her, Abuse Her,
Get Her Stoned And Then They Take Her, Break Her,
If She Says No Then Some More They Bake Her,
Dump Her Somewhere And Never Talk To Her Again...

Noone Ever Really Knew Her, Knows Her, Consoles Her,
It's All Just A Front She Puts Up
Stores Her Emotions In Paper Bags,
And Her Sadness Shows Through When They're Burned Up...

I Saw Through It, She Thought I Couldn't Do It,
But She Won't Admit I See Her Soul,
Instead Of The Lead Walls Around It...

I Want To Help, I Know I Can,
But She Won't Let Me Be The Man,
She Lost In Herself, And I'm Left Crying,
She's So Confused And Slowly Dying...

/ Lucia /



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On Sunday December 5th, 2004, Sin (1622) writes:
oh my Lucia, why havent i read more of you before now. this is amazing, i think a lot of people can relate, i know i can, simply amazing ~kristy


On Wednesday June 23rd, 2004, SilencedAngel (60) writes:
Wow....I know these feelings very well...great read


On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, An Expired Member (73) writes:
hmmm this is something everyone feels but then again we being we at times shut ourself thinking thats its the only way out..but it its...very nice read


On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, batman nipples (2256) writes:
*wonders why you didn't get any awesome comments on this piece, and then tries to suffice* This piece is simply quivering with emotion and it's so painful to read...great job with this. Absolutely amazing.


On Monday June 14th, 2004, hate_doll (327) writes:
...how can I respond to this?


On Monday June 14th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:
i agree...beautiful kya


On Monday June 14th, 2004, icyhott (45) writes:
nice job, i can definatly relate. *hott*


On Sunday June 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (16) writes:
She Never Gets What She Wants, Unless She Does Something She Hates... This part I liked alot. great job.


On Sunday June 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (5) writes:
I like this a lot. It kind of describes some of my friends. At least you care though about who this is for. I'm not sure if they have anyone who does, but maybe someday they will. It's a really good piece. ~Ashley



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