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"All Dolled Up" by Blyss Rayne

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A young girl stands in a corner of a dim room, all alone.
she's beautiful,
in a bizaar,
sad sort of way.
there's a sadness in her eyes that isn't within grasp,
yet without it she wouldn't be whole.
she wouldn't stay sane.
Her tears would be full of anger and pain and guilt and lies.
But without them she just wouldn't be
...her.
she would have no identity
...no purpose to keep breathing.
she paints her face to hide the reality,
but i can see it in her eyes.
It's a bitter lonliness.
waiting to be released.
She's all dolled up and no place to go,
and no one to take her.
she forgot how to believe in happy endings.



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On Thursday June 7th, 2007, An Expired Member (1) writes:
i love this poem and i understand where the girl is coming from! ~Windish~


On Tuesday March 21st, 2006, Kinkypoptart (757) writes:
Sadly, this happens all too often. Great write and great portrayal of hope/or lack thereof. ~*~Tart~*~


On Thursday June 16th, 2005, vaultgrl (236) writes:
....wonderful....I love it and feel her loneliness


On Sunday June 13th, 2004, SilencedAngel (60) writes:
wow....makes me speechless...wow


On Saturday June 12th, 2004, Bast (895) writes:
the last three lines make this poem quietly intense.


On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, glasshouse (780) writes:
Agree. Great write here. I really liked it. -Glass


On Saturday June 12th, 2004, Nadir (615) writes:
I dont know what there is to ever show such a girl. Most likely she have seen it all allready. The question remain ,what she realy want for. Being real maybe, feeling real. That takes alot, and sometimes only a little.


On Saturday June 12th, 2004, Nadir (615) writes:
She dosnt scare me though. I like this poem, I think it shows alot. Tiger



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