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When My Heart Broke

When I fell
Did you help me up?
When I cried
Did you dry my tears?
When I shook
Did you steady my hand?
When I screamed
Did you fight my fears?

When I was alone
I was in your company
When I screamed
It was you who scared me
When my tears fell
It was you who shed them
When my heart broke
You left it there to bleed

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On Thursday November 4th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (488) writes:

nice portrayal of emotion. love is a bitch!!! wonderful write! ~sex~

On Sunday June 13th, 2004, SilencedAngel (60) writes:

wow this reminds me of my horror with my ex....you captured everything perfectly...good work

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

yea, when my heart broke, he left it there to bleed indeed...u spoke the words from my heart... nice piece, i could relate to it now. welcome 2 DP. -MeL-

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

*favorites this*

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