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Masochistic Tendencies

The room is dim
Lit only by candles
On my satin-sheeted bed
Ecstacy rising
It hurts
Feel so good
Do it again
Dont stop
I feel so good
So free
Dont stop
Dont EVER stop
Oh, GOD!
The pain
Its so invigorating
So HOT
Cut my arm
Right your name
Let it bleed

I turn on the light and put down the blade
Look at the marks of my own hate

I love the pain you do not know
But I cry when I remember I was always alone...

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On Monday May 7th, 2007, An Expired Member (6) writes:

depressing, erotic, I like it (hurts)...

On Friday October 29th, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:

Wow, indeed ~ "I turn on the light and put down the blade Look at the marks of my own hate I love the pain you do not know But I cry when I remember I was always alone" ~ exquisite and saddening in a strangely enchanting way. ~ Rose.

On Sunday June 13th, 2004, SilencedAngel (60) writes:

this one reminds me of a friend of mine...i really liked this one

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, Clementine (153) writes:

canopy's suck

On Friday June 11th, 2004, Blyss Rayne (11) writes:

excuse you?

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, Arsonick (6) writes:

Wow. This is incredible. I really like the last two lines. Well done.

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

nice write on this, saw ya profile, ur a fellow christian like me, & im also morbid,*slaps u a high five*...similar situations,hee hee, but i'm dark,dark &dark, seldom light. lol -MeL-

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, urbanhumility (1377) writes:

an unfourtunate realization, a well spoken poem..........well done........urban

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