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..in a heartbeat..

"your pulse is really fast you know..."
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Why did you have to say it?
It's so like you to notice...

Did you really expect me not to know that i was barely
breathing?
Did I really want you not to notice?

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On Friday June 10th, 2005, Serenity (604) writes:

Little yet says so much. Wonderful. Simply wonderful.

On Friday December 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (95) writes:

i love this... -zay

On Friday October 22nd, 2004, Blood of Winter (376) writes:

Pieces like this are the reason I love this site and reason why I have added you to my favorite poets list...and this piece shall go into my fav list...the less you say the more you mean...

On Wednesday October 20th, 2004, Zophiel (364) writes:

Hmm. Conversation piece.

On Wednesday October 20th, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (130) writes:

i think i will change the title.. dont worry if nothing happens for awhile.. my home computer is broken. thanks both of you!

On Wednesday October 20th, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (184) writes:

... I Really Really Like It. It Has Such Charm! GPhD.

On Wednesday October 20th, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (184) writes:

I Think That In Its Current State It Seems Quite Complete. Like Lotophagi Said... Its Like Catching A Glimpse Of Someones Life. Very Interesting And Intriguing. So My Advice Would Be To Change The Title So That You Don't Hint At Its Incompleteness. I Real

On Tuesday October 19th, 2004, Lotophagi (465) writes:

just a snippet... it's like a bit of a diary being ripped out and found on the street... wonderful.

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