DarkPoetry -|- weheldhandsattheendoftheworld -|- When morning comes...

When morning comes...

Is this real or am I lost in dreaming?
When I wake will you still be at my side,
Or will I wake up alone and screaming?
Sobbing in mourning for this life, this lie.
Did you hold me and gently touch my face?
Did you search my eyes, searching to find me,
Lost in memories I could not erase,
Trying to take my hand and set me free?
Did we fly together beyond the stars,
Oblivious to the world, paused in time?
Hearts pounding, blood racing, did we fly far?
Is that your hand searching, reaching for mine?
I wake; see nothing. As I start to cry,
I turn my head and get lost in your eyes.

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On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, blue (1865) writes:

well crafted writing here.. had a nice rhythm too...~b

On Thursday October 28th, 2004, Blood of Winter (376) writes:

awesome piece...I have to go with Tim...it had me falling and flailing then rising and flying...definite yo yo feeling...keeps us on edge

On Thursday September 23rd, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:

wow that was umm wow your quite talented and very nicely done *JiNx*

On Thursday September 2nd, 2004, sixsixnine (450) writes:

you're talented i see .. this piece is deep & hides many meanings of need for love & need for dreams.. excellent poem.. *669*

On Sunday August 29th, 2004, indefined (738) writes:

more like a bungee jump with a miscalculated rope for me, i did not expect to find these images, if our memories were film, we would have worryingly similar sets at this point. what more can i say

On Friday August 20th, 2004, suicideseason (2172) writes:

_killer...i felt like a yo-yo reading this...very powerful.

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, An Expired Member (35) writes:

I turn my head and get lost in your eyes I liked this part alot. Its a killer work of art.

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, Reverend Machine (97) writes:

beautiful written, the end espcially rings to perfect, great write...-Dark

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, Emma Tenebrae (11) writes:

That is so well said - there is someone in my dreams that I can't quite reach sometimes -love the last line twist too.

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, Storm (187) writes:

Also I fell for the last line, great job.

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, An Expired Member (10) writes:

**sunshine**..yeah i cant spell my own name...

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, An Expired Member (10) writes:

i loved the last line "i turn my head and get lost in your eyes" i have felt this way so many times..great write. *susnhine*

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, An Expired Member (25) writes:

nice. very nice. im lovin the ending...lovin it! great job.

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (130) writes:

This was a sonnet that was assigned for our final in writers workshop. It was one of my better poems requiring stucture.

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