This is actually a poem i wrote for class but I liked the structure too much to leave it aligned!
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i thought the structure added so much to the piece which was already wonderful...i think weve all had someone thats made us feel this way, but you masterfully expressed this in a way ive failed to..great write ~kristy
On Saturday December 25th, 2004, ashrain (18) writes:
amazing. i love how it scanned. just beautiful..all around beautiful.
On Sunday August 15th, 2004, girlafraid (581) writes:
this is perfect...i love the form, and the background. The words certainly leave a deep impression on my mind...
I like it a lot. The old faded look and the crinkle at the nothing at the end makes it seem old fashion and gives it a special touch. Nice read. ~Kirsten~
Wow, a very different piece, both in structure and content. Quite a feeling of desolation and lonliness. (btw I really love the name "weheldhandsattheendoftheworld) ~Wish Upon A Star
you're right - the structure really adds to the impact of the piece, and i also really like the textures of/on the paper... I also think the first three lines are particularly impressive. Lovely. :)
On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, blue (1866) writes:
I concur...~b
On Tuesday July 20th, 2004, indefined (738) writes:
a wonderful ladder of as jezz said intruiging yet sorrowful descriptions. a wonder of nothingness.
On Tuesday July 20th, 2004, glasshouse (829) writes:
This was intriguing. Something about it gave it an infinite sorrow. I like the background. This is good. -Glass
