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Smile.
Enveloped in your world.
Physical invocation of all that you are.
       I breathe you in.

Your heart pounds
And blood races under flesh
That is warm and wet under my fingers.

       Your eyes close…
A moment’s pause.
     So much to feel;
It cannot be contained in a frail human shell.


A moment.
Sigh.
Relax.
Breathe.

It’s over.

       Open your eyes.
Everything we feel reflects there before quickly fading away,
Not to be mentioned again,
To be lost and forgotten.




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On Wednesday January 5th, 2005, MyScarsStillBleed (26) writes:
The imagery in this is so amazing, really really beautiful. This is just an amazing poem, I don't know how else to describe it.


On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, blue (1865) writes:
This was really well written; I don't know if this supposed to be about orgasms..hehe..but that's what I saw. ~B


On Thursday August 26th, 2004, Zophiel (363) writes:
I like the structure of this. Tight yet sprawling.


On Sunday July 25th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (615) writes:
Love your form of writing in this poem. Wonderful piece


On Tuesday July 20th, 2004, An Expired Member (33) writes:
Wow, i love the way it starts with the happy image of a smile, but ends so tragically. Beautiful ~ Psychotic


On Sunday July 18th, 2004, An Expired Member (70) writes:
This is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read in my life.


On Sunday July 18th, 2004, wonderlandhysteria (2228) writes:
This touched me somehow...even in the sweet simplicity of its lines there was some sort of truth, and I saw it...and it touched me...I thank you.


On Sunday July 18th, 2004, indefined (738) writes:
structured or not, this is a great peice, a well expressed portrayal of a moment. good stuff :)


On Saturday July 17th, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (130) writes:
Damn and blast.. there is supposed to be a whole different stucture but i was too lazy to html it... maybe i will do it when i have more time@



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