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silent crashing

i stood and watched the sea
rolling waves
running to the beach
azure crystal passion
under the moon
running to its lover
with graceful abandon
nothing but the rushing
joining of souls
resplendent and complete
combined and ethereal
and i wanted so much
to be that shore
be as lovely
as those grains of sand
shining with starlight
and you and your intensity
to be the tide
caressing and embracing
beautiful in the moonlight
yet i am nothing
but a soul upon a rock
shrouded against the wind
crying small pieces of me
into an unforgiving sea
and you are
farther from here
than the moon
from the tides
and you can not see
this crashing

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On Saturday August 11th, 2007, Winterwords (20) writes:

How often have I been sitting there, listening for footsteps in dream-lit hours, hoping someone would come wrap her wings around me - you just did...

On Sunday July 22nd, 2007, jack paper (215) writes:

lonely with a splash of discontent but very beautifly written

On Saturday May 12th, 2007, heartdripsblack (769) writes:

amazing. ~ saddened.

On Sunday April 8th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (409) writes:

You cannot go wrong with the image of an ocean or some big body of water. The place which makes most sense. Superb Write!

On Saturday April 7th, 2007, stormtalk (912) writes:

lovely writing

On Friday April 6th, 2007, Tonights Decision (173) writes:

this left me in another place or time.. when moments becomes ponds... and all that exsist is the crashing of the waves.. timeless poetry..

On Friday April 6th, 2007, carlosjackal (1615) writes:

:) Loved it..just the sort of poem I would to love to write and love to read...Thank You - Carl

On Monday April 2nd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1170) writes:

you kill me every time.

On Monday March 26th, 2007, raskal (197) writes:

'crying small pieces of me into an unforgiving sea' -amazing.

On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, NikesRain (1511) writes:

thank you both

On Monday March 26th, 2007, Rebel_not_Radical (164) writes:

~sometimes there are just things that limit you because it is what you have at your disposal (in your case being a soul in the rock) but maybe because it's fate or something like that...who knows maybe you'll find your soulmate because of that...

On Monday March 26th, 2007, Rebel_not_Radical (164) writes:

excellent write and a very touching story...i really felt this one...very cool

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