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every flake falling
instills a bit of jealousy
to be so soft and beautiful
to be so shining in quiet falling
all the things i can never seem to find
staring in the mirror at her

she seems serene enough
violin heartbeats in her smile
as her eyes betray the slight curve of her mouth
she'd never achieve porcelain status
but there are hints of stained glass
pinned to the curve of her neck
hiding behind the curtain of hair
her unfailing shield of defense

and if she moves just right
they wink like broken stars
as they fall expiring upon her spine
yet for a moment i can almost believe
the storm has infused under her pulse
tattooed its grace beneath her collarbones
hinting that her lips are sincere
in some sort of calm ease

and even when i shattered her image
unable to bear the illusion longer
the dust that settled
seemed more lovely
than i could ever
hope to be









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On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, Reefer_rave (238) writes:
I wish it were snowing... this is stunning.


On Monday March 5th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:
i was told to check this one out personally, and personally, you make me want to drop the pen. you bleed art.


On Saturday March 3rd, 2007, heartdripsblack (769) writes:
beautiful. i absolutely loved it. ~ saddened


On Thursday March 1st, 2007, Tangle Box Tales (169) writes:
this piece has a calming effect.it seems to day that all is well with the world.it kind of cradles the mind and the soul.I just love it when you get so romantic and soft - like a ship in the night sailing into port... Sighs. Stunning.


On Wednesday February 28th, 2007, Nuri (199) writes:
I must have read this three times before I could gather my senses and comment on this. You are an amazing writer and this was so beautiful. I was aching by the end of the third read. Thank you for sharing.


On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, Spiked Tongue (33) writes:
wow - amazing word play, your very talented


On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, Evil (552) writes:
:) miss you, nike dearest. this was magical. i love you


On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:
yes you are sensational.


On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, Tania (318) writes:
wow. that was astounding and lovely. i truly enjoyed every word. delicious.


On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
such a wistful yet gracious summary; sometims the deep recess of the mind subconciously unfolds a new perception of beauty and I believe you have achieved this in many of your poems; they haunt the soul in the most enchanting of ways....truly excellent -


On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
- Col. :)


On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, elisa (1988) writes:
ahh... truly..... you are beauty ......personified....... the way you form words.... touches every sensitive nerve in my body.


On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
amen..


On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, Disassembly Boy (101) writes:
This was amazing. your words are composed so beautifully. I'm in love with this..


On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:
you break me so completely...you paint such a heartbreakingly beautiful picture with your tender words and the sadness is so overwhelming, im gasping for air..you are stunning


On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:
i would trade every glistening snowflake that fell from a perfect sky for your smile *hugs*



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