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. nirvana . touched .

twilight quietly transcendent
in diaphanous fingertip poetry
flowing omniscient eternally
star dust infused
entwined

.we .
.
remain in the spaces
between breaths of hushed devotions
fluttering on soft breezes
as black velvet ribbons trailing
from naked white birch trees
symphonic in movement
elegant

.you .
.i .
.
fly to infinity
from the edge of a sleeping midnight
timeless in the grace of awakening
heartbeats entwined seamless
flawless

.us .

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On Monday February 19th, 2007, An Expired Member (30) writes:

wow so beautiful, really good. As you say "flawless"

On Friday February 2nd, 2007, TheProphetUntold (360) writes:

This seems to be written with your eyes. The imagination has a picnic with this peice. Fantasticly invigorating. Really, very, very good. +tpu+

On Friday January 19th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1103) writes:

"flowing omniscient eternally star dust infused entwined .we ." Just... beautiful. Well done!

On Sunday January 14th, 2007, glasshouse (801) writes:

"we remain in the spaces between breaths of hushed devotions" that is profound. this piece felt so delicate. i hardly took a breath. beautiful. you are so talented. you've lost nothing over time. gained, if anything. i adore you. -Jes

On Sunday January 14th, 2007, heartdripsblack (768) writes:

this was simply amazing ~ red.

On Wednesday January 3rd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

i cannot beleive ive been here 2 years and havent read your work. stunning. i have to read more of you for sure

On Tuesday January 2nd, 2007, WinterGrave (337) writes:

wow, this drips with passion. well done.~~~Grave

On Wednesday December 27th, 2006, AniDayz (1267) writes:

...beyond and beyond...beauty...this sings sweetly, softly, deeply...with such a strength, such a graceful.magick...lovely, everso lovely...you warm my heart...*chyu*

On Wednesday December 27th, 2006, Mylissa (1075) writes:

I love this.

On Tuesday December 26th, 2006, elisa (2017) writes:

the you ......the i .....spilling into each other so seamlessly.....i'm left swimming in your words. too beautiiful for words.

On Monday December 25th, 2006, An Expired Member (2) writes:

Wow! I am a very clumsy person in writing compared to you. I am very happy I read it.

On Monday December 25th, 2006, DeemedHeartless (49) writes:

extraordinary!

On Monday December 25th, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:

"remain in the spaces between breaths of hushed devotions" gah. this is perfect. so precious like the sparkle of a diamond. im glad i read this.

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