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Upon the hillside
the expanse of stars
our silent movie special
Next to one another
no words
no sounds
Your hand
so strong
enveloping mine
as if
I would run
to the milkyway
leaving you
far behind
You are now and ever
my favorite
constellation
You are the star
that guides
my nights
and watches
in the sun
I would do nothing
but move closer
to the orbit
of
your satellites
so that
I may
spin circles
around you
as you
have done
around
my
heart



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On Friday September 3rd, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:
Beautiful and romantic. Great write. -Michael


On Thursday September 2nd, 2004, Lynaes (1128) writes:
This is absolutely gorgeous Doe.. it's brought back some memories for me, I can relate deeply. this is so beautiful.


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, Northstar (454) writes:
awwww I love this piece--it just makes me melt almost as much as my puppy ;) very nicely done ;) *favorites*


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:
as has already been so truthfully said... this is beautiful. and i'm another who loves the ending. :) gorgeous write.


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, Armand (73) writes:
a brilliant metaphor with a recurring theme that works from start to finish. this seems to be your signature, which so few can do so well. another gem.


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, indefined (713) writes:
*echoes tim* truly beautiful, truly you, i can't say it better, so i'm stealing that. A real wonder.


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
_oh,how totally sweet...Doe...this is lovely beyond my words...i love the way you finished it...truly beautiful.truly you.;)i miss ya,baby.


On Tuesday August 31st, 2004, mysticventures (546) writes:
truely an out-of-this-world love poem!!


On Tuesday August 31st, 2004, Medusas Child (1613) writes:
another beautiful and wistful write,with splendorous imagery and style,especially loved the ending


On Tuesday August 31st, 2004, elisa (2021) writes:
what a beautiful expression of love:) it's like a warm blanket wrapped around the heart:) elisa



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