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the sky broke and cried
in wracking spasms
all of the pain i've let loose
up to these days
and threw it back down
in frightening fury

as if it couldn't handle
the weight i released
or rather it refused
to hold any more
of the sorrow i so
carefully folded and packaged
wishing it away forever

i could swear with every drop
the voice of some celestial deity
was woven into the lightning
begging me with scarred lips
to keep my breaking to myself
as every last ray of hope
faded fast within the downpour

and so it came to pass
that even the stars that once hung bright
turned their faces and hid trembling
unable to bear even my most quiet sigh
leaving me to surrender desolate
powerless to endure their withdrawal
i sank beneath the rising waves
to expire in recycled faithless tears












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On Saturday September 20th, 2008, heartdripsblack (779) writes:
wow. crushed yet again. ~ hdb.


On Thursday September 11th, 2008, sixsixnine (583) writes:
this hit me really hard. Phenominal work. you touched buttons rarely ever touched. there is a deep sadness here that I honestly feel sometimes. hang in there Beautiful


On Sunday September 14th, 2008, NikesRain (1424) writes:
*bows* no thank you all, very very much... *hugs*


On Friday September 5th, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (752) writes:
Nice! Great imagery throughout! I always love reading your stuff.


On Friday September 5th, 2008, Scarrzz (147) writes:
Oh, that hurts. It's so familiar. I'm really sorry you had the inspiration to write this, beautiful though it is in it's lonely watery depths.


On Wednesday August 27th, 2008, Narcissa (726) writes:
Only you can make a melancholy haze so beautiful...


On Saturday August 23rd, 2008, Sketso (631) writes:
...the images/thoughts in this, of recycled tears raining back down from the heavens... kills me. Very powerful write that stirs some of the selfsame feelings... and I'm tired of treading water.


On Saturday August 23rd, 2008, elisa (1991) writes:
pure sincerity. beautiful.


On Saturday August 23rd, 2008, Ainsof (1864) writes:
beautiful shweets... simply gorgeous, such aching, such honesty... such turmoil. painful and graceful as goddess tears always are



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