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thistle down and down

dreaming enraptured

chords and colors
inhaling perfection

wondrous divine

kissing autumn
forest dancing

acquiesce scintillation

hazel mind
willow heart

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fathom time
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dying stars
race brilliant

ice corporeality

laden heart
folding wings

fragments lamentations

tear streaked epiphany
she collapses

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On Wednesday September 12th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:

the first 3 lines ended me... luminous

On Tuesday September 11th, 2007, Winterwords (17) writes:

An emotional kaleidoscope,a soft and quiet beauty, like watching a swan at night, gliding acorss a twilit forest lake - and then I get the point, like an arrow to my heart...

On Friday September 7th, 2007, AniDayz (1236) writes:

these chills that run through me...my i have missed those, missed your works that create that sensation(much deeper than 'sensation') wihtin my self...thankyou...you, your art,are always deeply and truly appreciated...

On Friday September 7th, 2007, Tonights Decision (162) writes:

its like i am lost.. in an echo of water, dripping in a cave.. it feels like someone was hurt here..it lingers like whispers i cant really catch...

On Friday September 7th, 2007, elisa (1991) writes:

such a brilliant time lapse .........the rise and fall of raw natural beauty.... a thistle w/ thorns... i wouldn't have it any other way.... perfection.

On Friday September 7th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:

I like the slipstream feel of this....you juxtapose unique imagery with a casual sense of the sparse breaths that ultimately reveal identity and revelation....beautifully so I am a fan.....always. Great poem for me :)

On Thursday September 6th, 2007, Narcissa (726) writes:

"Inhaling Perfection" - That seems to sum it up. Love it.

On Thursday September 6th, 2007, urbanhumility (1374) writes:

your abstract prose is concise with feeling and internal articulation............very well done my friend

On Thursday September 6th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:

i can never tell you enough how perfect your words seem

On Thursday September 6th, 2007, DoctorAsh (503) writes:

The timing in this write could not have been more perfect. A monument of discription -trickling- down, leading the reader into a cove, where reflections of personal experiences and imagination create causality. Super write. Abstract. Daniel

On Thursday September 6th, 2007, Alanarchy (1695) writes:

Radiates light. Beautiful imagery.

On Thursday September 6th, 2007, indefined (679) writes:

fragments lamentations sums this up nicely. like pulling little splinters... nad pricking the reader with them. much love.

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