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"the Day and Night of I" by NikesRain

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contemplating interpretations
self perceptions contrasting
spinning impassioned and juxtaposed
datura and honeysuckle
twining about a copper bowl
with platinum dreams
.quiet.
scorched by the sun
washed in the rain
attempting to breathe in
every last wonder
of everything
hoping to be
a bit more
something
.still.
nothing more
than an echo
against the sky
a feather
drifting among stars
floating between clouds
.wishing.
through
twilight
to rest
dreaming
upon the moon
with quiet mornings
in open palms
.hidden.








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On Wednesday September 5th, 2007, indefined (717) writes:
there's something almost elusive about this... like a fleeting glimpse i can almost still in my mind, before it drifts again. the feel of it is very familiar.


On Wednesday August 29th, 2007, Zophiel (352) writes:
An amazing place the Moon. It rains and shines all at once. Thanks for the read.


On Tuesday August 21st, 2007, Winterwords (20) writes:
Hidden, you are not, your blinding light gave you away...


On Monday August 20th, 2007, TheProphetUntold (350) writes:
Fucking awesome. A perfect blend of the mundane and magic. Cheers, and thanks. +tpu+


On Sunday August 19th, 2007, Narcissa (737) writes:
A peacful piece to soothe my bitter heart. Thank You


On Sunday August 19th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2425) writes:
like a misty morning mantra ....when the water is still enough to contemplate and maybe find some kind of elucidation...this was very beautiful a read


On Sunday August 19th, 2007, saintedmad (1146) writes:
something.still.----that is everything, for me, in this write. . . .the stillness. . .quiet and coherent. .. . time.lessness



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