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Last Breath

I'm shielded by my own failures
blinded by the lies they fed us
blood waits to escape the dead flesh
can't wait to see life deminish

Darkness, clouding my soul
don't know what to do, don't know where to go
I've loved, and now I've lost
I'm ready to end my life at all cost
I'm gone, so here's good-bye
please stay in my life I beg you to try

I've been down swallowed my sorrow
don't think that I'll see tomorrow
so many ways out of this life
I can't wait to bleed myself dry

Darkness, clouding my soul
don't know what to do, don't know where to go
I've loved, and now I've lost
I'm ready to end my life at all cost
I'm gone, so here's good-bye
please stay in my life I beg you to try

I don't want this anymore
what the fuck am I living for?
Is this a fight I can win
Blade is sharp, ready to begin

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On Wednesday May 10th, 2006, Ainsof (1864) writes:

*putting my hands on your neck all I want is your last breath* hmmmm this is quite serrated, why is bleeding to death so poetic? What is it about the knife that makes it so fuckin ap.peal.ing?

On Thursday June 10th, 2004, An Expired Member (32) writes:

this is very good. it relates to me... i have had alot of people walk out, this work my reaction. great job. -Lauren

On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, _untouchable_ (71) writes:

i feel this completely, i know what you mean by loved and lost and cutting, i hope its not an endless circle. great piece

On Tuesday June 1st, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

Powerfull stuff, your words mean alot. ..::Rage::...

On Tuesday June 1st, 2004, snowdrop (2258) writes:

It was catchy...I wish you the best. Try to smile, even if it seems fake. It helps.

On Tuesday June 1st, 2004, Instant Insanity (726) writes:

This is pretty good, I dont know what to tell you, I write a couple suicide poems but I usually dont comment on suicide poems much, I like the poem

On Tuesday June 1st, 2004, BleedSilver (372) writes:

I usually don't comment on suicide stuff, but I can relate to this feeling. I was once really bad, and this same thing happened to me. I feel it still, and battle the way I feel every day.

On Tuesday June 1st, 2004, BleedSilver (372) writes:

But I live, for that is my choice. With writing skills like this, I hope you live too. ~Mikey

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