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Pseudo-Goth Bitches!

If you cut yourself with razor blades
Lighly, just enough for a scar
Then run around showing all the other kids
I don't really care who you are

If you live a perfectly normal life
Except when your shrink comes to call
And you tell him you're nothing but apathy
Don't bother talking to me at all

If you go on about suicide day after day
And how death is the ultimate grace
Then try to waste my time with that shit
You might get hit hard in the face

Give it a rest already, no one really cares
And I have a feeling that no one believes you
The "tortured artist" act is getting old
Can't you find another phase to go through?

If you really have problems that hurt you inside
And you cry at night about all you're missing
I wouldn't think of holding it against you
But I'm fucking tired of these pseudo-goth bitches!

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On Monday January 22nd, 2007, Collective Amnesia (243) writes:

hahaha. i know quite a few...told some of them off too..silly freshmen. good job ~Tamara

On Monday March 27th, 2006, Vicious Pixie (52) writes:

i couldn't have said it any better myself....you own :)

On Tuesday July 5th, 2005, The_Lady_in_the_Fire (26) writes:

Hell Yeah! ahh... memories from HS... hehe. Great write.

On Tuesday July 5th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:

very funny. very true. also very sad... I wonder how such people would react to true pain, true loss?

On Saturday June 25th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (319) writes:

stand up and shout that shit!! -kitty

On Sunday June 5th, 2005, Serenity (598) writes:

Hell yeah! Fucking awsome!

On Sunday May 29th, 2005, sIo (883) writes:

nice...

On Sunday May 29th, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:

haha...this was grand fucking spectacular

On Tuesday May 17th, 2005, void (49) writes:

i agree i have times where i want to die and i cut and it pisses me off when these fuckin kids are running around advertising that they "attempted suicide" with only a tiny cut thatll scar 4 a week and then dissappear

On Thursday December 9th, 2004, spaniellie (89) writes:

brilliant! i cant agree with you more. depression is not an invitation to a pity party.

On Thursday November 18th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:

I love you...

On Wednesday November 17th, 2004, Solace (1425) writes:

I hated something once...I can't remember what it was now...Oh well...I think i'll go cut myself up now, i'm offended *pouts*

On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

i completely agree with your words here.. WELL PUT, i know i've felt this for a long time, its tiring and frustrating..

On Thursday October 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (55) writes:

yep... i know quite a few of them, and their act is... argh... yes, well, thanks for putting that down. on behalf of us all...

On Tuesday October 5th, 2004, Circe Avalon (182) writes:

I t is very sad world were scars make you liked and self hatered is the trend. What happened to all those people who hated themselves when it wasn't cool? They died! Very true words!~*~Circe

On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

I'm reminded here of a slogan used by the Marines (Special Forces) which says, "Kill 'em all! Let God sort 'em out!" I guess all those "pseudo-goth bitches" should perhaps die, instead of cutting themselves & then whining about it. Okay, I'm done bitching

On Thursday September 9th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (497) writes:

yay!!! im glad that someone shares my opinions on this too. great write! ~sex~

On Thursday September 9th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:

this was deja vu`.... downright truthful... i would be one of the very misfortunate shrinks! :(

On Thursday September 9th, 2004, TheLastDragon (68) writes:

Thanks everyone for the positive feedback!

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

attention. great write

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

this is true. i used to have a friend who did all this stuff. she complained and went to a mental institution, but she always said she was nothing, then kept on ragging on me to help her. But she was totally fine, she even told me that she did it for atte

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, elisa (2020) writes:

goth never impressed me either. people who dress in scary images tend to be transparent(most of the time). it's the ones that hold the dark inside you got to watch.I was the cheerleader nobody saw coming;) great expression of frustration:) elisa

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Lemons (57) writes:

Marry me.

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Loketha Angel (157) writes:

this is one that should get out there. i know that when i used to cut, it was deep. but i don't anymore, you know why? becuase you are right. no one does give a shit. deal with your own problems! you go drag, you are so awesome. i love your stuff. keep it

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Drea (930) writes:

I applaud as well. I remember people like this when I was in HS. heh Great write.

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Jonas (878) writes:

yea, it's only the real goths that are cool.

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Loketha Angel (157) writes:

amen to that, i hate these new posers that walk my school now

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, Bast (896) writes:

um... he's being.... sarcastic! :D

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, Six-Out (1827) writes:

*snickers*

On Sunday May 29th, 2005, glasshouse (801) writes:

mwahaha. no comment. -Glass

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:

posers. ack. Leave the sympathy and attention for those who really need it.

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Dayer (201) writes:

ROFLMAO this rocked ;)

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, mysticventures (546) writes:

no chance - that's what they live for!

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings (43) writes:

thank god someone understands i cant stand those people. here where i live its a fucking trend to cut your wrists then show your friends then get put on anti deppressants its fuckign sick then all they do is whine about how

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings (43) writes:

little they have when they go to sleep up in the suberbs. they are so ignorant about their ignorance it makes me sick

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings (43) writes:

did i mention this was a great write i hope everyone in the world reads then then all the "pseudo-goth bitches" will wise up a bit hopefully.

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, mysticventures (546) writes:

you rock Dragon!

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, TheLastDragon (68) writes:

hehe... I try. You've got a lot of great stuff, too.

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