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the rain was like a cardiac caress sheets of droplets apon the moor skin flashing with lightning azure she never even felt the serenity he envisioned the rain as static legs of a thousand crickets snap crackles of delirium in the pools wading through the mire of dreams sedated, eyes subdue the sheen imagery rolling past the lens the missing pieces final sliced out of digital sync with only a reverberation to linger within the orb pulsating, the ink extends... its grasp on parchment wavers the hand wrote it for another page and it knows... oh it knows the clean white sheet is stained irrevocably marked on the surface fingers, the joint bends... depression, seeping from the gaze it seems to be the favourite color a robe the masses don to please slithers of digital decadence combined multitudes of laceration infusing them within the skin she envisioned the hail as dewdrops backs of a hundred camels broken rustles of hysteria in the breeze stalking through the gaps of seams the rain was like a cardiac caress a single droplet apon your door skin glittering with demure allure she never even felt her identity © Aaron Mader
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On Wednesday June 27th, 2007, Lotophagi (446) writes:
you and your ink.... damn, only you can make me feel seduced by the act of putting pen to paper, the scratch of the nib... the droplets of ink..... how do you do it? As always, master of mud, I am in awe. Thank you.
On Tuesday May 29th, 2007, NikesRain (1424) writes:
this read like heavy silk, the words waltzing through like murder of ravens taking flight across a cloud brooding sky.. capturing and caressing with cool fingers and a warm palm..... well.. i know..you know
On Tuesday April 3rd, 2007, soul dancer (163) writes:
I loved the first stanza. This entire piece was a tasty morsel of words. Gorgeous.
On Tuesday April 3rd, 2007, Disassembly Boy (100) writes:
This is perfection. Every word so beautiully used and flawlessly placed.
On Tuesday April 3rd, 2007, An Expired Member (1) writes:
A delicacy for the pictorial mind. The choice of words was genius and the descriptions left me mute. You have an amazing talent with words.
On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, indefined (679) writes:
Thank you all for your comments. I like your name Eternus, I think the rough translation for mine is careo termino.
On Tuesday April 3rd, 2007, Sin (1622) writes:
you amaze me...and this was nothing short of your usual genius ~kristy
On Tuesday April 3rd, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:
brilliant sentinet words full of passion and purge and rhythmically resonant. A true piece of resounding poetry that I enhoyed from start to finish
On Tuesday April 3rd, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:
wow if only I was *sentient* myself, I might be able to spell this impressively complex sounding words *innocent whistle*
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