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seamless, the circling waters rise to the edge of antiquity faceless in the hollow of man spurned by a burning soul cast from the nether-regions to wither in contempt for these living breaths timeless, shadow of the clock bearing the monotony within a construct of temporal motion radial seperation of the whole where each turn of the tide brings the dawn no closer towards the wilting dusk hopeless, losing primal instinct shutdowns in cerebral circuitry imprints on a single negative tell many a tale of memory submerged in a foreign blend with no discernible edges leaving the faculty of vision incapable of rendering any form of thought corporeal sightless, then now and forever the silence of a sash bound seer combing the astral for substance threads of the celestial map to weave his wires into webs and catch a sense of direction from the needle of a spinning compass magnetically driven from the source guiding faltering steps to shelter under a ceiling made of sky aimless, nomadic wandering hastening the footsteps fall to echo in four dimensions reverberation of the spirit strands of sombre sunlight pushing further into depth to spill the ink upwards spreading nervous impulse beyond the reaches of simple pain allowing that slender slice that minute amount required for that single breath robed in ambience before the ink runs down © Aaron Mader
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On Tuesday April 18th, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:
You words struggle in my mind burning me un-forgiven I wish I could write a better comment but I'm surrendered speechless
On Friday February 10th, 2006, stuart_pid (217) writes:
"that single breath robed in ambience" i think you found it. this is amazing
On Thursday January 26th, 2006, Ainsof (1803) writes:
amazing imagery, a river pulsating with vivid tropes arranged by a subtle structure...each stanza a current of its own yet blending into a force of *ink*
On Wednesday January 25th, 2006, Sanctuary (84) writes:
Great work here. It flows great, word choice is phenomonal! Look forward to reading more
On Monday January 23rd, 2006, NikesRain (1503) writes:
words that flow and inject the perfect blend of sharp breaths and mind twists to stir thought, emotion and reflection... amazing
On Monday January 16th, 2006, dismal silence (20) writes:
just runs through my veins, awsome work, i stay in awe
On Monday January 16th, 2006, An Expired Member (23) writes:
jesus christ, your damn good....i almost hate you your so good...this is amazing diging your fingers into my brain seperating conventional thought from reality...the images in this are mind blowing...well fucking done!
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