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private the piper plays turning the reflections within the musicians daze compositional expectations of music to ghost the days the nightingale droops on her precarious perch as gilted wings shudder with each laboured sigh melancholic notes flutter... shimmers of silver silence woven with the forlorn tones of a shephards' flute haunting the nights' air with such sanguine sorrow wilting chromatic moonbeams that pass within their hollow promising the wonderthoughts for a single mind to borrow beyond the other nowhere the dancers dine on death minds melding the melancholy 'till the moon runs out of breath towards another somewhere to suffer the fate of Macbeth the wolf stands firm on his precarious perch as silvered fur ruffles with each lustful howl a celestial body quivers... in sinful scintillation as desperate notes arise from the reapers' lute silent the piper plays twisting the deflections between the daylight haze compositional vibrations of music to show the ways © Aaron Mader
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On Monday February 27th, 2006, Marek (145) writes:
I really like this generally. word choice, the way the stanzas are contrasted. It works very well.
On Saturday January 14th, 2006, Urban Shipwreck (1001) writes:
This sent so many visuals floating through my mind. So many devastating possibilities masked. Too cool. ~Ship!
On Saturday January 14th, 2006, Lotophagi (459) writes:
this is so lush with sumptuous words and full-bodied lyrical power... it is delicious, creamy, soft..... not sublime, but divine.... absolute and pure beauty.
On Saturday January 14th, 2006, Lotophagi (459) writes:
Thank you so very much mud man for the escape, for the dream, for the "compositional vibrations"... I am lost among them still.
On Saturday January 14th, 2006, elisa (1987) writes:
collateral words......an absolute musical cadence..........to say i felt this would be an injustice to the quivering effect still lingering..
On Saturday January 14th, 2006, Ainsof (1730) writes:
wow, some serious internal rhyme and the imagination you must have...fuckin unbelievable...Awesome smddmb
On Saturday January 14th, 2006, Sanctuary (84) writes:
Breathtaking. Nice job here. You write fantasticly, and really put my work to shame. I dont read as much stuff on here as I should as I am missing things like this.
On Friday January 13th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1164) writes:
"the nightingale droops on her precarious perch as gilted wings shudder with each laboured sigh melancholic notes flutter... shimmers of silver silence"- gods, i am speechless..and i just want to sit here and enjoy this beauty. amazing.
On Friday January 13th, 2006, Ozymandias (59) writes:
This is completely amazing. I am actually at a loss for words to tell you how much I liked this piece. Thank you for sharing it.
On Friday January 13th, 2006, NikesRain (1512) writes:
gods how i've missed your writing... this is like being wrapped in velvet lush dark and smooth, beautiful yet threaded with sullen breaths.... its enchanting and consuming yet laced with such aching ..... leaves me breathless
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