| Raven |
| Solace |
| suicideseason |
| birdwell |
| knightmirror |
| Lynaes |
| evolve |
| Medusas Child |
| Rain In The Willows |
| NikesRain |
| Valentine |
| Lotophagi |
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seeing all yet
knowing nothing and feeling everything | | | | | a rock shifting of it's own will rolling towards a stream that flows against it's nature around trees growing more into the earth than the sky | | mountain peaks stretching towards the core of the world and starry nights enveloping fractures of a multi-verse containing but a fraction of space yet surrounding all with it's vast depths | | a painting hangs on the cold floor seen from the wall yet not the ceiling as the sense of nonsensical senses overwhelms the artist's strokes and the frame frames a mirror instead | | | | | seeing nothing yet knowing everything and feeling all © Aaron Mader
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On Monday September 19th, 2005, Philla (139) writes:
This is absolutly beautiful!!! You are, beyond all anything, going onto my favs. -*Philla-*
On Saturday September 17th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:
yea boi, youse good 'un poetretical like. I like 'em biggie lotsa.
On Saturday September 17th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:
...more seriously *puts on spectacles and tweed jacket* there were some seriously philosophical and serious discussions of a serious nature. You are seriously good, serious.
On Friday September 2nd, 2005, Mistress Shadow (366) writes:
This is a beautifully constructed piece. A bit of constructive criticism: something’s amiss in comparison to your other works. I can’t place it, but I’ve more to read. ~T~
On Saturday September 3rd, 2005, indefined (713) writes:
you will note that this work is listed as 'other'. i place these experimental works under other because they are different, and i can tell you exactly what's missing, but where would the fun int hat be ;)
On Sunday March 20th, 2005, NikesRain (1429) writes:
*sits stunned* wonderful imagery and flowing so pefectly together. Loved the opening and ending pieces...so very wonderfully you..*hugs*
On Tuesday March 8th, 2005, Zhee (640) writes:
"containing but a
fraction of space
yet surrounding all
with it's vast depths" .. i agree this was an absolutely fascinating write... so many dimensions fusing into one! loved the title....Superb!
On Friday March 4th, 2005, Medusas Child (1613) writes:
i once said a line in a poem, "observed in itself" this poem is what that is, astounding work
On Friday March 4th, 2005, Solace (1425) writes:
wow...this was completely mesmerising...wonderful work...shimmering with clarity...
On Friday March 4th, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:
i loved the form and concept of this one, done like no other could do...this was marvelous ~kristy
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