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create the time
within thought for another mine calling yours to another ours without insanity as the cause struck down for another ressurection and the earth has never felt so warm with it's embrace Ξ◦◦▫▫◦◦▫▫◦◦▫◦▫◦▫◦▫◦◦◦▫◦` 43;◦▫◦Ξ embrace me with sodden soil the wounds of a barren landscape lose themselves in shifting sands hands outstretched beneath the soil pleading for light yet not willing to forsake the heat found in shadow rivulets of dirt cascade down my spine backward to the downward motion of voidal vortex spiralling all is in reverse as I sink to yet another surface subdermal attrition laying the twisted path for a mental submission chords struck with violence subliminal insurrection heart bowing down to winds of future plight ...the cognition of composition fleeting thought returns from subconscious boundaries and find's itself whirling within pools still to even a pebble's ripple another world within yet also without no warm earth here in these razor breezes a windswept consciousness in desolate surrounds takes tentative steps toward a pale rose dawn and in doing so violates the security of what seems like an eternity of solitude and palms itch to find a spade to bury everything once more Ξ◦◦▫▫◦◦▫▫◦◦▫◦▫◦▫◦▫◦◦◦▫◦` 43;◦▫◦Ξ arisen for soul shard desecration yet can the core withstand to be cupped in the hollow of another life create in time the thought of another mine another yours to call ours with sanity on pause © Aaron Mader
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On Sunday March 12th, 2006, NikesRain (1511) writes:
today i needed this, to get lost in it once again, the flow and depth... thank you for not taking this one down
On Friday April 8th, 2005, stuart_pid (217) writes:
every stanza is a testament to your talent and imagination and i must agree with loto, "the cognition of composition" is something that will stick with me for a long time.
On Monday March 7th, 2005, NikesRain (1511) writes:
the opening stanza caught me up and gently let me flow down the rest of this...a feeling of being cradled yet spun 'round at the same time...
On Monday March 7th, 2005, NikesRain (1511) writes:
it was aching yet so beautifully surreal...catching my heart up and making it sigh...the ending stanza is so beautiful i think it carved itself onto my heart..
On Monday March 7th, 2005, NikesRain (1511) writes:
.."yet can the core withtand to be cupped in the hollow of another life"...my gods i certainly hope so...exquisite work luv
On Friday March 4th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (865) writes:
The end kicked me over, this was beautiful...very well spoken hon.
On Friday March 4th, 2005, Lotophagi (457) writes:
wow.... I think the first and last stanzas are just power punches.... it's beautiful, raw and potent,
On Friday March 4th, 2005, Lotophagi (457) writes:
"...the cognition of composition" that whisper, damn, I love that line... it's so relative to my thinking and my life at the moment, it's a superb choice of words....
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