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the question unasked waits for a voice
to release it from the caged mind fear of truth penetrates like a barbed thorn of doubt embedded in the psyche remove it with rusted tweezers taking the risk of being killed by the spread of infection ...or be paralyzed by it the song yet written waits for a melody yearning release through supple notes dread of doubt perpetuates like a jewelled dagger of truth encased in the bloodstream pushing further with hollowed palms risking death to find a meaning within these winds of direction ...or be blown away by them ........................................+.....+.......... .............................. I used to fly to the highest heights lifted by words whispered on breezes I looked into the dream of tomorrow and gazed upon delicate stars of wishes I thought were real above the muted mists lay constellations that rise with every lingering breath looking down on yesterday's wonders that stare through the fragility of veil towards a horizon surreal contented I drifted there in that bliss oblivious to the storm clouds rolling in I didn't hear the thunder laughing at me deaf and blind by words I was the perfect target for the killing bolt serenity shatters as the lightning lingers shrouds of purple vision trusts betrayed and I couldn't see the blackened clouds blind and deaf by thoughts I made a perfect arrow for your lethal bow odd how it gets so quiet before a storm heartbeat reverberating in the chest everything so serene and quiet, peaceful it's hard to see that first one coming strange it seems after the rain has fallen blood flows throbbing within the veins nothing is calm nor is the heart at rest it's hard to face the end of your coming ripping through your misconcieved perceptions showing you the stones upon the path that look like a schitzophrenic hopscotch board that loops back upon itself mirrored mazes would be less decieving opening corridors to the ways between hard to see in hallucinogenic games of chess the moves cycle seemingly without reason ........................................+.....+.......... .............................. singing the song that will move me evermore discarding the riddle inside without fear of dissapointing trusting in the whispers that echo in a whirlwind of flow that sweep butterfly wings to a display of colored complexity that will highlight the shadow ...be the relief for the burning scar speaking the query that will open the door setting need for truth over fear of disappointment hoping that in that one response the answer will unfold like dragonfly wings with stained glass magic will move across the soul ...be the salve for the open wound © Aaron Mader
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On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, NikesRain (1508) writes:
each time i read this, it amazes me.... you took my disjointed ramblings and injected and arranged them with your brilliance and talent.. thank you so much for this, for always
On Wednesday August 24th, 2005, fushigi no kaosu (88) writes:
that was beautifuly breath-taking!! congats you two.
On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, Lotophagi (459) writes:
wow.... I can't believe I haven't read this before now..... so beautiful, I think the others before me have summed it up beautifully. So one more comment, perfect, absolutely perfect. Thank you.
On Wednesday January 26th, 2005, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (122) writes:
i agree with everything sex said... my god man! beautiful! good job both of you!! jess*
On Friday January 14th, 2005, sexually_sadistic (502) writes:
breathtaking words. this couldnt get any more beautiful, it is perfection in a very fine form. this grabbed me from the beginning to the end. on the fav list it shall go! ~sex~
On Friday January 14th, 2005, suicideseason (2161) writes:
Um...my head is spinning...This is an incredible work of art.The subtle changes of tone throughout...My God...Amazing...You two really are something special.ThankYou.:)
On Thursday January 13th, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (93) writes:
Awesome write. I am just in awe of the amazing talent u 2 share. Incredible--Steph
On Thursday January 13th, 2005, Sin (1652) writes:
this was amazing,i was caught with the first line and the rest was flowing perfection, you too blend well with each other, good job to both ~kristy
On Thursday January 13th, 2005, K_Love (701) writes:
"I made a perfect arrow for your lethal bow" Incredible write you two, I loved the vivid description of the coming thunderstorm I felt as if I were there. You created a beautiful piece of art and an awesome visual affect. Well done, great job.
On Thursday January 13th, 2005, Brenya Rose (190) writes:
This was excellent. I am in awe of your talent. This was, was, amazing.
On Thursday January 13th, 2005, NikesRain (1508) writes:
..thank you Aaron for once again working your magic...you're the best...i'll leave a proper comment when i get my wits back. much love to you *hugs n kisses* ~Rene
On Friday January 14th, 2005, indefined (726) writes:
no no, thank you darl. your writing lifts me to the heights of thought where wonders are found. i consider it an honour and priviledge to write with you, you're amazing.
On Thursday January 13th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (1002) writes:
Absolutely stunning. Each and every damn line in this is quoteable, very very nicely done you two. ~Ship!
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