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curving folds of drapes
hang from suspensory winds letting fatal leaves flutter through doorway afflictions ...floodgate addictions this room depicts grey shade surrealism and grass shore shallows as the rope constricts around necks of realism with hands holding hollow laughter at the conflicts lives that slaughter idealism and drink the blood that swallows ...dance the blood that wallows soiled and severed ties and buried remnant affections plucking the heart-strings hate stricken scars raised to skies glints haunting the deflections back to epiphanies of an end-date I have severed now all my ties and buried remaining reflections plucking my bass strings of hate ...my bass strings of fate carving folds into drapes hanging in suspensions wind sweeping fatal leaves a-flutter through doorways attritions ...through doorways compositions © Aaron Mader
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On Friday December 10th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:
This is lovely Azz...I think it's my favorite work of yours to date...exquisite wording and flow...okay, I'm shutting up now, or I never will...
On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, stuart_pid (217) writes:
i love the way your poetry evolves. i read it over and over finding further beauty and meaning every time.
On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, An Expired Member (13) writes:
This was incredible, everything in it is just so right. Outstanding work.
On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:
This is too wonderful. Tremendous . . exceedingly exceptional, my friend. I must favourite this work for never have I read something so unique, so otherworldly. "as the rope constricts
around necks of realism" - such a mind you possess . . such a mind .
On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
And yet another impressive piece from the veIndefined catalogue...does it ever stop?Masterful...the epilogue to each verse is awesome,really hammering the point home.Out of this world,man.
On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, Lotophagi (449) writes:
"...through doorways compositions" evoking, constricting, visual, intelligent, scarily apparent - "this room depicts grey shade surrealism" - just phenomenal..... as always you spin me out with your words and visual structure. You create something far mo
On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, Lotophagi (449) writes:
You create something far more than a mere piece of poetry, it is more intense than a dramatic work, and far more enticing then a novel. Thank you. Absolutely brilliant.
On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, Lotophagi (449) writes:
oh yes, just to be slightly more verbose - did I say I like it a lot? :P *runs off before I continue you boring you with my adoration and incoherent rambles.... and eats more dirt*
On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:
beautifully constructed and compelling piece... love the small whisper almostecho lines, especially the first one. Excellent piece.
On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
this did miraculous things to my head.. some thoughts just fitted in perfectly...."as the rope constricts
around necks of realism" you never cease to impress me... a truly superb piece of work!
On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:
superbly written work,i felt this might have been inspired by remedios varo?, youv epainted the scene brilliantly as though to catch the intricate details and essence
On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, ShadowFlight (139) writes:
I like this- though it makes me uneasy- something hits too close to home...
On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (497) writes:
"plucking my bass strings of hate" damn how fucking awesome is that! i love it... great work! ~sex~
On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (497) writes:
your page looks very cool. i really like what u have done with it! Coolness indeed! ~sex~
On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
Dude...my head is in another universe right now.I'll be back to comment in full.
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