| Raven |
| Solace |
| suicideseason |
| birdwell |
| knightmirror |
| Lynaes |
| wonderlandhysteria |
| anth |
| Rain In The Willows |
| NikesRain |
| Valentine |
| Lotophagi |
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clocks tick
out the sighs ...~... walls of paper, frames of straw ...~... the lighters click flames finger flies rising mists of vapor knock on the door hours reflected in kaleidoscope glass see where you've been are and have been never ending hallways leading to some other nowhere cloned beyonds of before minutes consumed in mirror glint pathways reflect what you've known known yet not shown the echoes of an infinity lend voice to some other nowhere regal silences of yester-year trapped in an origami wonderhell looking for the exit through acid etched glasses of ink a way out of the mad hatter's pocket the only key that fits the lock a 52 pick up pile new cards with all the same face needing to find the one that hit the ground first reverse the polarity imbue crystal orbs with clarity to search for stolen fragments hidden behind frailties of framework a way behind the cheshire cat's grin the only lock that has no key dominoe tessellation alike in shape and form yet lacking the same numbers that were displayed last traverse the singularity clocks tick out the demise ...~... supporting paper, arches of straw ...~... the lighters click flames finger fires risen mists of vapor and starts burning down the door ...~... you are so beautiful Rene, much love ...~... © Aaron Mader
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On Thursday May 15th, 2008, WickedAngel (12) writes:
And one more (an afterthought) What a vision this poem creates. A mental visual of wonderland!
On Thursday May 15th, 2008, WickedAngel (12) writes:
That poem...your talent...the only word I can seem to get out is AMAZING!
On Tuesday November 27th, 2007, NikesRain (1512) writes:
this still... *sighs*... miss these mind bending blendings and your ability to twist them perfect... much love always
On Monday November 29th, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:
"origami wonderhell"...orgasmic...52 pick up was outstanding...masterful from start to finish...to say that you two are amazing together would be a gross understatement.Awesome,you two.Much love.
On Sunday November 28th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (588) writes:
amazing imagery. a wonderful collaboration..beautiful imagery.. completely spun me around..
On Sunday November 28th, 2004, Solace (1420) writes:
Your line and anths line...its everyones you know...and its beautiful...the whole piece is extraordinary, really truly wonderful...
On Saturday November 27th, 2004, Zhee (642) writes:
this was a magnificent write by the both of you.... and you are right aaron, every verse fits in so perfectly that its not easy telling the two of you apart! superb work!
On Saturday November 27th, 2004, frozen (756) writes:
that was so amazing great imagery the way the words flowed in general was brilliant awesome write.
On Saturday November 27th, 2004, NikesRain (1512) writes:
amazing..you took the pittance of words, morphed and enclosed them into something absolutely astounding. You are wonderous and i'm blessed to know you. love you much, ~ Rene
On Saturday November 27th, 2004, indefined (726) writes:
pittance my left cheek, you wrote the amazing, solid foundations for this.
On Sunday May 22nd, 2005, NikesRain (1512) writes:
you know i could never have done something like this with what i gave you.....you just took it and made something so intense and gripping....and i know nothing in regards to your left cheek, although i suspect the out is as sweet as the inside
On Saturday November 27th, 2004, ShadowFlight (140) writes:
the interplay here is incredible- feeling, even a veiled sensuality..beautifully done
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