| Raven |
| Solace |
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| Valentine |
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... .. ... .. . .. .. .... ... .. . ... .. . . .. . .... .. ... . . ... .. .. .... . ... ... . .. . ... .. ... .. . .. ... .. ... .. ... .. ... .. . .. .. .... ... .. . ... .. . . .. . .... .. ... . . ... .. .. .... . ... ... . .. . ... .. ... .. . .. ... .. ... .. ... .. ... .. . .. .. .... ... .. . ... .. . . .. . .... .. ... . . ... .. .. .... . ... red sands are sweeping my path now as I tread further from the white sands of your presence and my home from far afield i drift through a melody inane hopes of an understanding that will keep us both sane this twinkle in my eye not by definition or designed to entertain ..|.|.. voluminous veils conceal finely entwined necessities neural nexus shift strengths ..|.|.. subtle ironies now realigned *************** ********** ***** ********** *************** from far afield you drift through a harmony inane hopes of a returning that will keep these souls together bound in your eye theres definition beauty wrought depths to be sought and wonders to be found ..|.|.. voluminous veils entail finely enwound complexities the neural nexus a shift of strengths ..|.|.. ironies of subtlety lay claim to the unfound white sands once swept my path yet now I tread further into the red sands of your lack of presence and for now my home ... . .. . ... .. ... .. . .. ... .. ... .. ... .. ... .. . .. .. .... ... .. . ... .. . . .. . .... .. ... . . ... .. .. .... . ... ... . .. . ... .. ... .. . .. ... .. ... .. ... .. ... .. . .. .. .... ... .. . ... .. . . .. . .... .. ... . . ... .. .. .... . ... ... . .. . ... .. ... .. . .. ... .. ... .. ... .. ... .. . .. .. .... ... .. . ... .. . . .. . .... .. ... . . ... .. .. .... . ... ... . .. . ... .. ... .. . .. ... .. ... .. ... .. ... .. . .. .. .... ... .. . ... .. . . .. . .... .. ... . . ... .. .. .... . ... © Aaron Mader
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On Thursday November 18th, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:
as visually striking as its content; great piece! I like the way Lotophagi put it. :) I agree.
On Friday November 5th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:
beautiful and honestly powerful as well, nice write .. quite amazing..
On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:
-amazing and it is a priviledge to read this. ~ Rose.
On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:
Amazing. Your work always leaves me with so many word glitterings, dripping from my mouth . . yet through your exceptional talent I feel almost humiliation if I attempt to write a comment, expecting it to justify this. In other words . . you are too amazi
On Monday November 1st, 2004, stuart_pid (217) writes:
each line in and of itself is poetry made that much more beautiful when read side by side. i love your style and i can barely keep up with your vocabulary. another excellent work.
On Monday November 1st, 2004, Lotophagi (449) writes:
just wow. you didn't just kill me with words, you then put it into a visual masterpiece - just to make sure I'm dead and buried..... beautiful. Thank you.
On Sunday October 31st, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
desolate indeed...subtle pain delivered gracefully...such style.killer,A.
On Sunday October 31st, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:
the last stanza is what really struck me about this piece...it seemed so desolate...very artistic...
On Saturday October 30th, 2004, NikesRain (1422) writes:
..i know only as I read this, it seemed quiet, with a full voice but gently moved over my mind as I read and wound my way through the lines, with breath shallow and long. Beautifully executed and presented luv.
On Saturday October 30th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
i agree.. this had a pounding affect on my neural nexus... that now bows to your sublime writing ability...another absolutely amazing write!
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