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life dreams
us as we dream life ..|.. endless cortortions of pain agony and strife amdist the wandering nomads a fey film sits behind ears cauterised vermillion cyst the shadows of unseen foes so easily dismissed yet they lurk within the scope of limited visions fist a fleeting moment to some and yet an infinite twist of reality to the others retinal hallucination consumes and leads to delusional domination the cerebral unwinding of dreams trance like elation sight beyond the reach of horizons plight dissembles even further from minds burial site reaching for some other ephereal force to remind us of that which is real at the rims blight a twining of discontinued atrocities wound their way around humanities domestic flight seeking still to reunite the eye of beholders infrared light with that which we ironically pertain to . . . that which we call sight we dream life as life dreams us behind shadowed screens ..|.. endless proportions of agonised pernicious scenes © Aaron Mader
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On Tuesday February 20th, 2007, Sin (1636) writes:
youre brilliant..thats all i have to say about that..
On Thursday January 6th, 2005, empty_love (18) writes:
I have to honestly say that I loved this work.
On Tuesday December 14th, 2004, Northstar (455) writes:
I have really missed being around--i am gonna catch up on your works ;) this piece is amazing from start to finish--I love the opening and closing stanzas
On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:
Oh man..."retinal
hallucination
consumes and
leads to
delusional
domination
the cerebral
unwinding of
dreams trance
like elation" made my head spin...your choice in words always offers so much rich visual pleasure.awesome,Aaron.
On Saturday October 30th, 2004, Lotophagi (451) writes:
"a twining of discontinued atrocities wound their way around humanities domestic flight" just absolutely beautiful..... the entire piece speaks beyond the words you've written. Excellent write.
On Friday October 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:
Vell-defined! i like the your mind works, and your choice of words... DEEP
Graffic-Lyrix
On Friday October 29th, 2004, glasshouse (801) writes:
This was so liquid. The red really set the piece in motion and the white was stability... foundation. I loved all of this. I really did. And... I may agree with stuart down there. -Glass
On Thursday October 28th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
"life dreams us as we dream life" genious words right there.. I love this. your work is always so engulfing.. mesmerizing. very nice work Aaron.
On Thursday October 28th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
these words cut right down to my soul... talk about awesome! Brilliant concept expressed with dynamic imagery and sheer genius! *applauds* your work makes me think what on earth do i keep babbling about! :)
On Thursday October 28th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
this was very well done-the structure kept me interested and the title pulled me in to begin with. overall this was a very strong piece. nice job:D
On Thursday October 28th, 2004, NikesRain (1474) writes:
I'm in awe, at every turn. Each stroke of your pen causing my mind to twist and turn to see the visions without the veil, raw persistent outstanding. Yet at the same time cutting so deeply.
On Thursday October 28th, 2004, Clairvoyant (11) writes:
Yeah, it does sound like a metal song. This is a cool piece.
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