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arise from colors of nothing wing-beats aflutter float up from illusions of something butterflies rising to soar above sunlit skies starting as a tickle these winged wonders come forth from days where thought remains behind draped obscurities to alter forlorn frowns into an evolutionary pathway of vines that bloom into crimson creases that renew the process of seemingly unknown smiles flutterbyes waving to extinguished soulful eyes ending in a trickle those winged wonders cascade through misty rays where thought is in chains behind raped securities to weave a thorn filled crown fitted to a revolutionary brow of weathered lines that draw into crimson pieces riddling askew the process of shattering veins mosaic tiles butterflies descent to a wingless woe forsake now empty skies sensations demise from shades of something wing-beats aflutter soak up the illusions of nothing © Aaron Mader
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On Friday January 13th, 2006, NikesRain (1511) writes:
it never fails... when i need something beautiful to trip through my mind.. hauntiingly sweet aching and surreal i come here.... always such *sigh*... you steal my breath Azz... thank you
On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, Serenity (601) writes:
The last stanza I loved the most. But the entire thing was beutiful.
On Monday December 20th, 2004, Sin (1646) writes:
this was devastatingly beautiful, even with the under current of all the sadness, spectacular write ~kristy
On Sunday November 28th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
many lines that dance throughout my imagination, beautifully painful.. nice title as well. another amazing write..
On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Northstar (458) writes:
this is really beauitful and crushingly forlorn--amazing work as always with themes scary-close to my own
On Thursday October 28th, 2004, NikesRain (1511) writes:
beautiful, sad, aching. Amazing work as always.
On Tuesday October 26th, 2004, Valentine (513) writes:
This has such eloquence. I can only express how much I love this by making it a favourite . . I am too stunned. Thank you. ~ Rose ~
On Sunday October 24th, 2004, stuart_pid (217) writes:
i dont know how you do it man, so creative and eloquent. everything you write is art at its finest.
On Friday October 22nd, 2004, Zhee (641) writes:
WOW! this was sensational! i am in love with the 3rd and last stanza.. you are soo gifted aaron! *applauds*
On Friday October 22nd, 2004, Zhee (641) writes:
there was such grace and eloquence about this...an absolute fav with me! thanks so much for this one!
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