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| knightmirror |
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| anth |
| Rain In The Willows |
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time peice
in torrents traitors to design cracks of corrosion constructs wilting fine line shooting star pale memories chronological chromatic death disintegration cell by cell pale visions of the remnants of a soul wadead fadead jadead gone death's fiery descent atomized what lingers delays the driven source flowing embers ire malicous mires drains of dire derivatives sodomy lobotomy monotony remains heavenly body earthed wallowing pit of compunction flickering cast out temptation succumbs to half-orc conviction life's dreary death dive molecular reintegration soaring corpse canonized descending to depths of decadence snickering passed out bringing death to new shades of shadows that shame many entities to dwell in a season of cerebral expiration the glory of the rise decapidated by the humiliation of the fall atmospheric razorblades slice to the bone with the mercy of satan bleeding star black hole destiny crashing burning erased memory vacuum mentalities sucking sins strength a waltz through the narcotic necropolis mosaic threads of vein shattered shores in crimson calamities an afterlife of annhilation dissolutions of light relay compositions reconstructions of darkness the reapers ruination bleeding veils void mortalities citation dooms decay strokes death with little more than penile termination dead-star dance empty irrelavance spewing spurting vermillion caress a trail of bloody stardust rains from the sky pure radiance devours itself forced ,accepted improvised cessation indefinedseason of veinsuicide a glimmer of hope is too much to ask for dead star forgotten visions of a lone crucifix atop a hill of hollow banalities of baleful belligerence topple the torrential construct of collusion nails are ripped from what were limber limbs live halo demolished a grim chorus of scar tissue screams blots out the sound of futile prayers muttered by the psychotic paranoia of dwindling faith under the shroud of reapers grim fallen star wings of web fall,my child with endless grace suspension of elegance in sustenance of flesh warped waypoints of the psyche delay corruptions of control that defied the reins of Gods sour segregation sinking red moons heretics of life arise,my hate with undying fire arise,my love my heart's desire arise and die again designs peice in ressurection revel in time fractures of extinction fatalities decaying fine lines © Aaron Mader
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On Thursday October 21st, 2004, Solace (1423) writes:
carcinogenic termination opus alright...god its like a rain of blood and death...a slaughter of the soul...takes me back to my thrash metal days...wow
On Monday October 18th, 2004, anth (1610) writes:
this merged so well,i couldnt differentiate the two writers,a symbiosis union of emotion and stylish wording,tightly wrapped up in a coccoon of imagery
On Monday October 18th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
this was absolutely perfect.. total rocket fuel...!! definitely a fav! *standing ovation* you deserve it~
On Monday October 18th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:
"bleeding star black hole destiny crashing burning erased memory" How amazingly stunning is this piece! I just loved it.. ~Wish Upon A Star
On Monday October 18th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:
**And the seer peered into the looking glass... long and dark it seemed, he saw beginning, middle and end, all at once... With crystal clarity he saw at once all that is (or was) ever to be... It was this, and this alone that drove him to madness**
On Monday October 18th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
everything around is dying, decaying, screaming with pain. something in the center, no matter how futile, doesn't like it, won't accept it, and will never be silenced "...arise"
On Monday October 18th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
it's long, and the images fly by fast, the little flickers of something, almost in the back of your head while you read, keep life throughout. oh yes, and the half-orc was brilliant ;)
On Monday October 18th, 2004, suicideseason (2146) writes:
_Aaron,i can't tell you how much fun i had.it's like i told Jezz, writing this with you was like watching someone bleed to death and laughing about it.you outdid yourself.thank you much,sir.
On Monday October 18th, 2004, indefined (717) writes:
man, it was an honour. such a pleasure and so much fun. you outdid your own self as well man. rock on, poet.
On Monday October 18th, 2004, glasshouse (803) writes:
"that shame many
entities to dwell
in a season of
cerebral expiration" There are SO many phrases like this one worth quoting. But this is a hella long piece and you dont wanna read it in your comment box too. :P
On Monday October 18th, 2004, glasshouse (803) writes:
It was so well worth the wait. You guys seem to have captured a sense of decomposition. Tim said it, writing this piece was like watching someone die and laughing. Reading it was just as eerie. I love it. Well done. -Glass
On Monday October 18th, 2004, glasshouse (803) writes:
These are my BOYS!!! *messes up their hair* -Glass
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