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a blank face
portrays the mask to be worn indefinite... multi-shadowed crayons poised to colour surrealy solemn threads into tapestry spun as rivulets of blood in bloom run from the barrel of a ribbon wound gun the sonic aura of bass reverberates through a room of hollow demure like silence captured in a calamity of codeine a cube of condensed correlation consumes that of the mind while tainting that of the soul a daze to enrapture this craze flows of the illicit travel through veins networked like a maze thought reels remaining uncaught as the uncaught remains unthought the deeper flakes of inner scraping the nights fight to see what will be wrought whispers whirl in the voids of vortex a tremulous cadence of incisive serenity to consume all in a dead star of vacuum the vague vagrant vagabond veils his veins crackles of fire aglow a page that has temporarily forgotten the embers of rage these chemicals erode angers crumbling abode as eyes seek out the paths hidden in the vast array of forks in the road retinal scanning seeks to crack the internal code a raptured face sets the task abroad limits infinite multi-echoed complexities poised to discolour fragiley woven threads into tapestries of dye combining rivulets of blood entombed with the chamber of a ribbon wound gun © Aaron Mader
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On Saturday May 7th, 2005, An Expired Member (23) writes:
thank you for telling me about this. this is fucking awesome. every line, every phrase was genius. fucking brilliant!
On Thursday October 14th, 2004, glasshouse (801) writes:
This was a lucid ride. I felt every word. The first and last stanzas in particular were very intense and understatedly powerful. Nicely done, as always. Glass
On Friday October 8th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
_your style is so intelligent,without losing any sense of art or style.i would know your writing as yours if both of my eyes were gouged out with spears..."the sonic aura..." that stanza was intoxicating.awesome,Aaron.
On Monday October 4th, 2004, Solace (1425) writes:
This is like...fuck metaphors...this is awesome! Spin me round in circles any damn time you want to!
On Thursday September 23rd, 2004, NikesRain (1421) writes:
..another avenue of you to peruse. Different from previous work but definitely all you. I liked the intensity of this that makes you really read it, slow down and really take it in.
On Thursday September 23rd, 2004, NikesRain (1421) writes:
You have such a great talent for word choices and flow, creating such thought provoking writes. Excellent
On Thursday September 23rd, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (120) writes:
i love to read your words.. always flowing, always new, always beautiful, always true. i didnt really intend for that to rhyme.... lol but thats how it went..
On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1103) writes:
'a tremulous cadence of incisive serenity
to consume all in a dead star of vacuum' Wonderful...just, wonderful. Bravo!
On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, stuart_pid (217) writes:
fanfuckintastic. i wish i could say something of more inteligence to justify just how good this poem is but compared to your words i just sound dumb.
On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:
i absolutely love this,for me what makes this stand out more to me than others of your works is simply that its just fuckin cool man,straight to my faves
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