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gnarled fingers of delicacy
point to a sky as inwardly pointed the new suns light a caress in itself why do only some of the leaves remain? on the nearly naked tree of a nameless guilt silently in breezes of inconsequence sitting... standing neither up nor down in this orb of pretentious equality to mark a meadow of seemingly endless green proportion quiet musing delays importance of entreating task truth in deception... maybe a solitary standing on surreal plains isn't quite the fulfilling hollowness i once saw or it might just be that to see this is in itself a lie perhaps in this lush dew ridden land it was only meant to be me upun this enticing backdrop of inner peace a sigh escapes the loss of your perception to be he that is not what he wants to be is to see what not to be memory of alluring worlds in satin missing peices of my final absolution yet fear not my mate of souls i still see as clearly as i see you are not what are you not? are you not what i am? or am i what you find me not? time warped sense of interwined priorities butterflies in a jar a poignantly sad reminder of exquisite beauty bound © Aaron Mader
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On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, OttOEviL (98) writes:
Now this..Single piece..Inspires me to be a better writer..Thank you..
On Monday February 27th, 2006, NikesRain (1508) writes:
this still, every time i read it, engulfs me, and at times i'm not sure if i should rage against the unseeing or just hug you because you are you
On Friday July 16th, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (122) writes:
wow... i just wanted to stay wrapped up in those words forever.. and thank you for your comments, they were much appreciated.. oh and by the way opeth fucking rocks!!
On Wednesday July 14th, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:
_damn...you really know how to structure poetry well...i am always riveted to your words.i love the passage that Nike quoted.i can't believe that this has so few comments.i guess some folks don't know true art when they see it.awesome.
On Sunday August 29th, 2004, indefined (726) writes:
its all about irony tim, this is probably my favourite peice, its in pattern for one of my more uniquely me peices to sit in the shadow. It's amusing. :)
On Monday July 12th, 2004, NikesRain (1508) writes:
..I just became completely engulfed by this. The wording flows so nicely, guiding you along. I loved the lines .." maybe a solitary standing on surreal plains isn't quite the fullfilling hollowness i once saw." Superbly done.
On Monday July 12th, 2004, wonderlandhysteria (2197) writes:
Oh, this is amazing...the last three lines are my favorites, but I also love "memory of alluring worlds in satin"...this is inspiring.
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