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Mrs. Submissive

i will not kneel
i will not bow
and open my mouth
to seek your pleasure before my own
(even if salvation
lies solely in the back of my throat)

i will not sit and listen
seen and never heard
and i wont form my life
to your melody
or words
(it was never me
who inspired your ugliness anyway)

i will not find peace
in your maniacal preaching
when your message isnt love
(it isnt even lovely)

i will not open my heart
or my legs
to welcome you
to all that dwells therein

and i will not be your sin
or your atonement

i wont be left alone
to hand out heartache as i please
while you revel in the glory
of my unquestioning submission

and
i will not
i will not be moved
i will not be moved by you

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On Wednesday February 20th, 2008, Bast (1008) writes:

This was beautiful. Cold and brutal, yet spoken in words that sing.

On Monday January 7th, 2008, An Expired Member (46) writes:

very powerful and unique. so far from cheeky but much more assertive in knowing yourself. so few do

On Tuesday July 3rd, 2007, A_Puppet_Show (224) writes:

I can believe you mean these words. If I didnt then this would be horror. I hate watching people try to fufill themselves and fail. I would rather watch death then. I am not proud of that fact. But you should be proud of this.

On Tuesday July 3rd, 2007, carlosjackal (1555) writes:

It's a shame in the year 2007, that many men haven't evolved beyond what you describe. But then, if man truly evolved, he would become woman =) Good, strong write. -Carl

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, Lab Rat (330) writes:

the final stanza spoke like a shot... bravo

On Saturday June 16th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1798) writes:

Thats so unfair of you... No realy. This was words of impact. Powerfull and as allways I as a a man feel the urge to scream after reading such writes

On Monday May 21st, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (399) writes:

love it.

On Wednesday May 16th, 2007, Mylissa (1157) writes:

I agree with Col, this is wonderful chanting style flow. Outstanding.

On Monday May 14th, 2007, saintedmad (848) writes:

i remember this one from the unearthly, resolute ending. still solid. ness

On Monday May 14th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2402) writes:

excellent chanting tribal phonetics...the power of the words rises to the force of the feeling; control is the key. Wonderfully expressed - Col.

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