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"Accolades Relinquished (The Making of an Effigy)" by glasshouse

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Smoke lingers
In the thickness of the air
And she finds herself
Exhaling
More than she took in.

It’s complicated.
To love a gypsy,
Like a Roman graveyard prostitute.
To crave her body
Mind, and essence.

The desire
To savagely change her.

Because she
Will never
Stay with you.
(Or anyone.)



The wind has ceased.
As if the whole earth
Holds her breath,
Waiting for acquiescence
That will never grace her face.

And she is statuesque.
Not in artistic infamy,
But because she’s made of stone.
(The sort that will stand
The test of time,
And all those who would try
To break her)



(That is to say…. you.)


So cast your foolish notions
At the bottom of her pedestal,
And leave them there.


Your unrequited love
Will worship at her feet.




It is, after all, the smallest sacrifice
One could make
To such an exquisite creation.




An excruciating compromise,
I know.

I loved her
From the moment I created her...
And even I have never held her
To this day.




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On Monday October 1st, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1881) writes:
It’s complicated. To love a gypsy .. Blew my mind. Cous I've had many poetic ingame session with Nadir about gypsies


On Friday September 21st, 2007, Dommi (131) writes:
i am in love with this piece, definitely a favorite.


On Monday September 17th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:
viiiiii vvvviiiiid.... yeah, vivid... wow. i have to come back to this.


On Monday September 17th, 2007, NikesRain (1508) writes:
beautiful in its flow and emotions... deeply pulling and grasping, wrapping around the heart to where it almost can't breathe, but it does... ever so gently so... amazing


On Monday September 17th, 2007, capt_funguy (1006) writes:
this really is gorgeous, - raise the eyebrows , close the book, heavy sigh and now they know. wonderfully complete with the last stanza assuring the sentiment... sweet - funguy


On Sunday September 16th, 2007, sIo (896) writes:
perhaps because i am the witness, not the audience, neither here, nor there....never really black and white, just expression within the gray scale.... this is when i wish words spoke actions...


On Sunday September 16th, 2007, sIo (896) writes:
...where i could speak love, if only as a character...and know you truly felt the act....this is one of the most deeply woven pieces you've written....you once said i write for you, darling, you're the one who writes...for me.


On Sunday September 16th, 2007, sIo (896) writes:
i wish i had a box of glow in the dark stars that i could put up on your walls and for every time like this when i wish i could show you what you've done to me through your words...i'd put a star up on your wall...


On Sunday September 16th, 2007, sIo (896) writes:
and wish for it to fall for you...so when you feel unloved or sad....just rip down a star and know that someone's wished their love for you...


On Sunday September 16th, 2007, glasshouse (812) writes:
You're the sweetest person who ever existed. I adore you. Thanks, babe. --Jes



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