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I put on all my makeup
And wore my hair up nice
Just so you'd find me beautiful
When we went out last night

My shy and trembling hand
Reached over and sought yours
They entangled into one
And I knew I wanted more

So I looked up at your eyes
And you quickly turned away
What is it that you musn't see?
What are you afraid to say?

I hastily took back my hand
And I placed it in my pocket
You asked me if I got your note
And I simply said I lost it

But I knew the one you spoke of
The one where 'we couldn't be'
That said you were too afraid
Of ever losing me

I brought you down beneath the bridge
To talk and sort things out
I kissed your cheek and undid your pants
And watched it all hang out

And of course you grew too nervous
And tried to move away
So I smashed a rock into your head
You will be mine today

I began to have my fun
And I forgot about the note
And in case you regained consciousness
I held a switchblade at your throat

As footsteps began approaching
I dragged you away with me
And hid you in a thicket
So no one else would see

I began my long walk home
And smiled to myself
The things that I had tasted
Would be worth the trip to hell

Straightening my shirt
I quietly stepped inside
My mother asked me how it went
I grinned and I replied:

"I left him with an impression
And I know he won't forget
And should he get the wrong idea
I remember where he lives."



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On Monday April 3rd, 2006, Poetaster (17) writes:
Mmmmm... I'd crush your skull and slurp grey matter off your face. Sweet madness, just a taste.


On Monday May 23rd, 2005, Serenity (600) writes:
Damn! This is awesome!


On Monday May 23rd, 2005, Elise (267) writes:
Omg, Dommi..this was awesome! I loved it ^_^


On Sunday May 22nd, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37) writes:
Awsome. Condifence and evilish, great elements.


On Thursday February 17th, 2005, Lab Rat (327) writes:
.... thats possibly the coolest thing i've read in a long time HAH great write


On Thursday February 17th, 2005, CorruptedLittleGirl (345) writes:
Hah. Nice. Very nice. Bastard had it coming to him. ;)



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