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I love you to pieces by Dommi
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I love you to pieces

~ Dommi ~

Always and forever
I promised to you
I'll hand you my heart
Of black and blue

I'll give you the night
Every diamond and star
Any treasure you want
It won't matter how far

I'll build you a castle
Away from all else
With nobody around
Just you and myself

I'd fill it with mirrors
To show you your face
This beauty I've found
Reflecting your grace

And at night in our bed
I would kiss you so softly
With every breath of pleasure
I'd take over your body

I'd confine you to me
With the finest red ribbon
I'd watch you all day
This prize I've been given

You're my favorite thing
And I won't give you up
Not even for sunlight
And the warmth of its touch

Your eyes screamed to me
I had sewn shut your mouth
You were starting to cry
I won't let you out

I unlocked the chains
That would bind you forever
Your body was shaking
Blood poured as I severed

We'll last for eternity
Within my own reason
You heart's in a jar
I loved you to pieces...

Copyright 2004 Dommi Of Baphomet
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  • elementual On Thursday, May 6, 2010, elementual (19) wrote:

    I love this poem so very much. Love, passion, obsession, twisted commitment. It all swirls together into one of the best poems I've ever read.

  • punk mc cool On Tuesday, March 2, 2010, punk mc cool (131) wrote:

    i really liked it....heart breaking >.

  • Jade On Monday, December 28, 2009, Jade (998) wrote:

    Twisted IS a good word for it, i dont recall reading this before, imglad i got to it now.

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Tuesday, March 17, 2009, Spiritus_Frumenti (368) wrote:

    This was great...twisted and powerful...-l-

  • A former member wrote: it starts out as a love poem ad i love the way love turns into lust into obsession in to psychosis into butchery.....i couldnt have done it any better.GOOD JOB

  • Lylani On Thursday, October 2, 2008, Lylani (130) wrote:

    Amazing...I love the beautiful mix of passion and obsession, it flows so effortlessly to the darker side. A definite fave!

  • Mars On Tuesday, May 13, 2008, Mars (625) wrote:

    this is so beautiful. something every woman deserves to hear really. just perfect. this screams fave to me. -mars

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful toxic words my friend. Just Beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: best poem ive ever read..yo!!

  • Tinuviel On Sunday, March 16, 2008, Tinuviel (54) wrote:

    Beautiful

  • A former member wrote: mysterious and captivating

  • A former member wrote: Intoxicating words, I relate, I adore, I love.

  • Circe Avalon On Wednesday, November 28, 2007, Circe Avalon (140) wrote:

    In the beginning it was mushy and super sweet. But In the end it was fan-fuckin'-tastic! Good write!

  • A Better Way To Die On Friday, November 16, 2007, A Better Way To Die (242) wrote:

    Divine extacy slathered on buttery flesh, a work of dark delights!

  • anakronistik_me On Saturday, January 27, 2007, anakronistik_me (31) wrote:

    beautiful. i love how it went from being like a romance novel to an episode of law & order. very well written. i really enjoyed it. -_ nakro_-

  • BeautifullyRuined On Friday, November 17, 2006, BeautifullyRuined (110) wrote:

    And people say i`m insane.You are but in a beautiful way*Elana*

  • xserratedsoulx On Saturday, February 25, 2006, xserratedsoulx (244) wrote:

    i'm addicted to your poetry. ~lauren~

  • CrestfallenTears On Sunday, October 2, 2005, CrestfallenTears (18) wrote:

    Oh wow, I like this...way deep!!!

  • Serenity On Monday, May 23, 2005, Serenity (517) wrote:

    This is perhaps one of the best poems ever. Nice :)

  • Astra Dei On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, Astra Dei (599) wrote:

    this is way supberbly awsomly wow! lol for real. its good!

  • flying_fox On Monday, January 24, 2005, flying_fox (711) wrote:

    wow... great 180 turn in emotion and imagery. Great rhythm and onderful words... I loved "I'd confine you to me With the finest red ribbon". hmmmm I'm sitting here smirking and nodding my head. I really like this!!

  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Monday, January 24, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (74) wrote:

    i liked that...twisted!--Steph


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