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Always and forever
I promised to you
I'll hand you my heart
Of black and blue

I'll give you the night
Every diamond and star
Any treasure you want
It won't matter how far

I'll build you a castle
Away from all else
With nobody around
Just you and myself

I'd fill it with mirrors
To show you your face
This beauty I've found
Reflecting your grace

And at night in our bed
I would kiss you so softly
With every breath of pleasure
I'd take over your body

I'd confine you to me
With the finest red ribbon
I'd watch you all day
This prize I've been given

You're my favorite thing
And I won't give you up
Not even for sunlight
And the warmth of its touch

Your eyes screamed to me
I had sewn shut your mouth
You were starting to cry
I won't let you out

I unlocked the chains
That would bind you forever
Your body was shaking
Blood poured as I severed

We'll last for eternity
Within my own reason
You heart's in a jar
I loved you to pieces...



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On Tuesday May 13th, 2008, The Poison (279) writes:
this is so beautiful. something every woman deserves to hear really. just perfect. this screams fave to me. -mars


On Monday April 14th, 2008, brad7193 (8) writes:
Beautiful toxic words my friend. Just Beautiful.


On Tuesday March 18th, 2008, chemical_X (16) writes:
best poem ive ever read..yo!!


On Sunday March 16th, 2008, Tinuviel (68) writes:
Beautiful


On Friday February 22nd, 2008, haunty sex (10) writes:
mysterious and captivating


On Monday February 11th, 2008, Phoenix-Nexis (10) writes:
Intoxicating words, I relate, I adore, I love.


On Wednesday November 28th, 2007, Circe Avalon (184) writes:
In the beginning it was mushy and super sweet. But In the end it was fan-fuckin'-tastic! Good write!


On Friday November 16th, 2007, fallen (249) writes:
Divine extacy slathered on buttery flesh, a work of dark delights!


On Saturday January 27th, 2007, anakronistik_me (42) writes:
beautiful. i love how it went from being like a romance novel to an episode of law & order. very well written. i really enjoyed it. -_ nakro_-


On Friday November 17th, 2006, BeautifullyRuined (160) writes:
And people say i`m insane.You are but in a beautiful way*Elana*


On Saturday February 25th, 2006, xserratedsoulx (310) writes:
i'm addicted to your poetry. ~lauren~


On Sunday October 2nd, 2005, CrestfallenTears (22) writes:
Oh wow, I like this...way deep!!!


On Monday May 23rd, 2005, Serenity (604) writes:
This is perhaps one of the best poems ever. Nice :)


On Wednesday March 30th, 2005, Astra Dei (655) writes:
this is way supberbly awsomly wow! lol for real. its good!


On Monday January 24th, 2005, flying_fox (802) writes:
wow... great 180 turn in emotion and imagery. Great rhythm and onderful words... I loved "I'd confine you to me With the finest red ribbon". hmmmm I'm sitting here smirking and nodding my head. I really like this!!


On Monday January 24th, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (93) writes:
i liked that...twisted!--Steph



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