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blood oranges

I cut blood oranges
Ontop of a paper plate
Its juice stained my fingers
And its pulp stuck on my face
As I contiue to wipe the tears away
Leaving a sticky streak of red
Under my eyes

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On Thursday September 9th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

The images created certainly fit this poem well. Short. Sweet. Deadly. ~Shane~

On Friday August 6th, 2004, girlafraid (577) writes:

i like this..i agree that it is creepy but cool all the same

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Northstar (453) writes:

very nice piece--haunting

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, manywalks (947) writes:

Had a surreal taste to it when read.

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, sixsixnine (583) writes:

short but triippy write.. i like this poem* 669 *

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx (79) writes:

i think i pulled something a bit different from this because when i was 13 and got told to stop self harming, they made me slice fruit with a razorblade instead. so yeah this creeped me out.

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx (79) writes:

great write though. i especially love the last two lines.

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

morbid and different...but I think I might have missed the meaning...

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Kfritz (16) writes:

Its just of kind of fruit theres no hidden meaning...atleast not on my end

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, GirlintheBox (50) writes:

kinda creepy...i like ;)

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