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Would you miss me
If I disappeared?
My body will still be here
But I wont
My body will always be here
In the wind where its ashes float
Into the sea where they’ll sink
In a fish after being eaten
In bird shit that lands on your car,
Both fish and my body will be there
In the sponge that cleans it
Then it’ll be washed down the drain
Eventually evaporated into the sky
And back to you during the rain
A part of my body will still be here
But I wont
So, would you miss me?




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On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, Guillotine (223) writes:
I really liked this. Mirrors a lot of my own thoughts.


On Friday September 17th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
A question that all of us will wonder before it's over...


On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
Yes, I guess I would, & even if I really didn't, then it means I really should! This poem made me laugh my ass off, because it reminded me of a Syd Barrett song, "Dark Globe."


On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:
... wow, very thought provoking, very nice.


On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, suicideseason (2102) writes:
_i love the way this was written...like taking a cruise ship through hell...a gentle fall down a flight of stairs...i know that i make no sense.don't try to make any.excellent.


On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, manywalks (947) writes:
...and all things are eternal and cyclical... ~ wen



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