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I don’t want to be here anymore
Sitting, staring
Waiting for you to speak
Hoping the awkward silence will end

I don’t want to be here
Sitting and staring
At what I might become
Poor and hopeless
No pride or self-respect

I don’t want to be here ever again
Sitting and staring
At a women who choose
To play the victim,
While running from man to man

I don’t want to be me right now
Being told to make your mistakes
 So a child can never be
More successful then you

I don’t want to be the me you see
So I’ll stand up and walk out

Just because you created me
Doesn’t mean you decide who I am



Copyright 2004 Kfritz

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On Friday September 10th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
My favorite stanza here is, "I don't want to be the me you see, so I'll stand up and walk out." Excellent. Always reassert yourself when you can.


On Friday September 10th, 2004, urbanhumility (1374) writes:
beautiful, true, and well written........urban


On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
Always be yourself, and hold dear tight to that for if you lose yourself you have nothing...awesome piece.


On Thursday July 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (23) writes:
rebellious and independant. overthrowing the the one who binds you. i love.


On Thursday July 29th, 2004, Simply Me (53) writes:
"Just because you created me, doesn't mean you decided who I am." Awesome. :)


On Thursday July 29th, 2004, mysticventures (537) writes:
great attitude in this piece - shows independance of spirit



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