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Dreaming of another

I close my eyes and see you
the sun is still asleep
The stars gently light your face
our nearly bare bodies
covered in dew
grass under our backs
but its all my imagination, and
when my eyes open
youre alseep
lying there snoring,
wrapped in my blanket
dreaming of another love
so I close my eyes
to pretend its me whos in your head

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On Friday March 4th, 2005, Loneal (118) writes:

A self-wrought fantasy, forced, needed ... neatly expressed. Good job! ~L (Synthetic Darkness)

On Friday September 10th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

Ah, the pain of love! Nice.

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

the most sorrow filled gentle pain is the kind that kills us the most....bravo.

On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, Soulseeker (119) writes:

*the sun is still asleep* nice play of words and something that I have pondered before... Bethany

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