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Blue Skies Granted - for Brian by Savannah
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Blue Skies Granted - for Brian

~ Savannah ~

The world, to you, seems cold right now
And you're locked out in the rain
But it will not last forever
Your sun will shine again

Your clothes will dry, your skin will warm
Those black storm clouds will part
And blue skies will be overhead
To soothe that aching heart

Until the storm is far away
And your sky is clear and blue
Just think about a warmer place
And I'll imagine too

Copyright 2005 Savannah
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  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, October 10, 2007, carlosjackal (1798) wrote:

    Absolutely wonderful. This gives me fuzzles =) -Carl

  • The Zebra Warrior On Friday, January 26, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2209) wrote:

    awwww.....mine is better :P

  • blue On Friday, January 26, 2007, blue (1606) wrote:

    god damn brits! haha

  • The Zebra Warrior On Friday, January 26, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2209) wrote:

    where?!?!?! Shoot dem fuckas!! God damn Chicago-ites!! :p

  • blue On Saturday, September 23, 2006, blue (1606) wrote:

    rawr. =)

  • blue On Wednesday, August 31, 2005, blue (1606) wrote:

    :) thank you again.. still smiling :)

  • DarkDruidess On Friday, May 6, 2005, DarkDruidess (162) wrote:

    sweet...if only everyone had friends like this...

  • Twilight On Friday, May 6, 2005, Twilight (1917) wrote:

    saweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet

  • blue On Friday, May 6, 2005, blue (1606) wrote:

    :)

  • K_Love On Friday, May 6, 2005, K_Love (597) wrote:

    So sweet. Wonderful.

  • Sin On Friday, May 6, 2005, Sin (1406) wrote:

    a beautiful tribute for a beautiful soul...lovely sentiment wrapped in a ribbon of kindness ~kristy

  • The Zebra Warrior On Friday, January 26, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2209) wrote:

    beautiful soul?!?!?! Crook!!! :p

  • NikesRain On Friday, May 6, 2005, NikesRain (1215) wrote:

    beautiful indeed *bows*

  • blue On Friday, May 6, 2005, blue (1606) wrote:

    o.O eh?!? Ya know, I've been going in circles all week, questioning everything...and you've slapped me in the face with the reasoning I couldn't find myself..not once today, but twice?

  • blue On Friday, May 6, 2005, blue (1606) wrote:

    and, I certainly see it coming in this form! :) Thank you truly, you came out of nowhere and lifted me up.. I receive your beautiful words humbly and thankfully. You're a sweetheart! ~b

  • blue On Friday, May 6, 2005, blue (1606) wrote:

    *didn't see it coming.. :P You got me flustered..

  • AniDayz On Friday, May 6, 2005, AniDayz (1051) wrote:

    i dont know if i have a right to comment on this...but this is absolutely beautiful...perfect for brian...

  • sIo On Friday, May 6, 2005, sIo (794) wrote:

    so sweet and beautiful...none could have done a better job :)


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